good story

Oh, that's OK. I'm sorry to hear about your family. This story is awesome. Update whenever, I won't push you.

Aww! Koda is so cute! I love it!

Oh this sounds really cute!

It must stink to have family members in the hospital 0.0'

I get that "not-in-the-writing-mood feeling" too. But you're a good writer, better than I am.

I am also making a story about Ravenpaw falling in love. Well, the story doesn't revolve around him, but my first character, Aroekit (a black kit with blue eyes and a white paw and a weird white marking on her chest.) Aroe doesn't mean anything, just a plant I made up called the aroeplant that's like a golden feather that grows in dry places. It's also the marking that's on Aroekit's chest. The story's really complicated, so I can't describe it. BON APPETIT!

wow your a good writer

It looks like a really cute story! I can't wait to see how it turns out.

It sounds like an okay story, somewhat intriguing, be sure to continue it. Oh, and by the way, I love the name (because I love the song :D)

Aw, this is sad! And it's funny, I have something almost exactly like this... Hm.. S AWESOME ANYWAYS! D

It seems cute.

You have a couple typos here and there but other then that it's pretty good.

I would love to see more of this story.

Maybe longer chapters? -puppyeyes-

Your fan,

Tigerlily of Shadowclan