Oh poor Optimus... he shouldn't deserve Megatron's violent treat...
Can i translate this article into Chinese ?

Really scary introduction! I felt was if I was watching a psychological thriller!

This was actually the very first fic I've read since joining fanfiction. It is the best one I've read of all and I constantly read it over and over. My favorite ever. Your stories and writing styles are amazing and unique! You MUST keep it up! You're simply amazing at this! I'm only 13 but when I read this it almost seems like I'm reading a proffesional novel! Please, keep up the amazing work.

-Nitrofrost2

this was very good very powerful story enjoyed it very much

This story was awesome! I LOVE IT! So I think this is the reason why Optimus and Megatron aren't able to kill each other... if one of them die, there the other will feel all the pain until the death consumes him.

I feel bad for Optimus, he has a dark past (I love you description about him XD) Megatron tortures him all the time... but this session helped him to battling the tyrant XD

Good job with this story! I wish you could made a sequel!

Whoohoo! That was awesomoeness. I love that story Instead of them being actual brothers, semi-spark bond is a cool twist. -dances in circle- that was so cool!

On to read the next story! Woot woot!

Just gotta luv this story and how you write it so GOOD! Amazing! Megsy is a Megsy and Prime is a Prime. You wrote 'em really similar to what they actually are! Impressive! And how Megsy seduced Prime was... ugh *covering nosebleeds* marvelous! Pls write more and update soon! *beg ya*

Beautifully written story! What an excellent take on the faction leaders' backstories. I love all of OP's inner conflict, it was very believable and quite moving. I also love how dark and manipulative Megatron is. Their relationship is so...WoW, intense!

WOW! I don't know what to say...just wow.

Megatron is really rude in this story.

Like I knew him all the timeXDXD

You write really good!

(sorry if my english is bad...)

THIS FIC IS AMAZING OMG I MUST READ MOAR. :D

Wow, life really sucks for Optimus and Ironhide. This is such a great story! I'm suprised you haven't gotten more reviews. Keep writing!

"He's an angsty youngling, isn't he?" I think Ratchet pretty much summed up Optimus in a nutshell!

Megatron...the evil seducer. Optimus has a point though...why try to spark bond with him, then kill him? Makes no sense, even for Megsy.

And Ironhide...~tries to speak but only a high pitched noise comes out~

At least Ironhide pulled his head out of his aft...unfortuantely, he seems to be paying a rather steep price for it. DX

But, GAH! the evil cliffy. oh please, PLEASE update soon! Ironhide is getting the slag beaten outta him and Ultra Magnus is about to break...something, about 'Hide to Optimus and why am I willing to bet that it was about his participation in the raid and not about his aft-whooping?

Great job! Keep it up!

NO 'HIDE DON'T DO IT! GAH! Do we have to take your cannons away again to get you to realize what a bad idea that is? v_v

Seriously I have no idea why you don't have more reviews. This story is awesome. I'm sorry that I have not read this sooner! You have a very nice writing style and with no giant gaps in the plot that forces me to go back and read it...well, yeah i DO go back and read it again and again, but that's because I want to so that doesn't count! XD

Anyway, keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor Optimus-Ironhide saw everything! I hope Optimus will find something he needs from Ironhide that will make him stand up to Megatron.