Reviews for Long Island History
Troyella-Tiva 4ever chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
You have a good plot but you could do better by being more detailed in what is happening and how everyone feels. Also i noticed you obviously don't speak english as a first language was language do you speak?
SHAREBEAR chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
I love it. Could there be a sequel in the work of this story? Love to read it. :) Curious about who Helena is and who is the mom, now I'm going to wonder about it. :(
Itsall4fun chapter 6 . 11/12/2009
oh very interesting - Gibbs has another daughter! I like your story. It was great to see a different side of Tony. Hope you do a follow-up story.
NCIS Wolf chapter 6 . 11/11/2009
good story. the “That was Ziva. I think I love her.” thing is still open so see you in the sequel. oh and Washington History is better.
creative-writing-girl13 chapter 4 . 11/5/2009
Oh my goodness, so many murders
angeleyes46 chapter 3 . 10/4/2009
keep up the great work.
keysmashtoinfinityandbeyond chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Yayy!

new chappies!

luvin it man!
creative-writing-girl13 chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
I think this is cute, please update soon!
blarney chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Interesting. More please
keysmashtoinfinityandbeyond chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
YES YES CONTINUE!

Itsa luvli peice'a writing an im dyin 2 read more!