Reviews for Devotion and Sacrifice
mindless82 chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
Wow, this Story really hooked me. Maybe someday you'll give us an mindblowing ending. i really, really hope for it. Thank you for sharing!
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 22 . 4/5/2019
the lack of description (and information) of the characters has been bothering me for awhile rn; like when I'm trying to learn cian's last name and the name 'lovell' was appeared few chapters later. hell,even u make me still confused about how old is he until more than 15 chapters later... I even still doubt about his hair color:v
but if it's sebastian,his description won't bother me that much because,hey,what kind of Sebastian Michaelis would he be if he wears something besides black or dark maroon?

and not just about the characters' description, but the lack of the dialogue as well. especially before cian and sebastian getting along; cian's lack of dialogues makes him a bit colder than Ciel Phantomhive, and his relationship with sebastian is so awkward that I find it hilarious XD

but speaking of their relationship, i have a feeling that sebastian was like cian's parental figure as well as a butler and a fuckin' teacher at the same time since Warren, cian's father is barely confirmed that he's exist until the fire incident...
I mean,why not? sebastian is the 1 who rised him since he's 10, and he still took care of him even when they reunite again after,what? 14 years?:'P

well... that's untill chapter 16 anyway

sebastian's view on cian began to change from his usual type of caring to romatically care XD

but I mean,really... even when cian's cousin said that cian have a crush on sebastian, she had me chocking on my own saliva and burst out laughing cuz i'm always well aware of the story genre:'P

but although that cian is a bit colder than ciel,I think he's a bit more sociable at least, like how he want to have a conversation with sebastian without feeling awkward.
and it's quite hard to imagine that cian,the reincarnation of a nobleman called Ciel Phantomhive,playing a video game such as kingdom hearts, and watching an anime XD I swear that part had me crying cuz idk I should feel bad or not for sebastian cuz he doesn't have any fucking idea what the hell is cian talking about XD XD XD

damn,he doesn't even know what is iPhone:'v

and cian keep avoiding eye contact with sebastian was hella cute and awkward at the same time just like how he doesn't know how to have a conversation with sebastian X3
reanseih chapter 10 . 11/22/2018
Wait. Marlene and Finley? Now, those are rather familiar sounding names...
Aservis Roturier chapter 3 . 2/6/2017
I enjoyed this chapter, but would have found it much more satisfying if it had been a hornet shich attacked the boy and sent by the History teacher specifically to detain him a bit.

Even more satisfying would have been a bit more of an anaphylactic reaction- at least enough difficulty breathing that it would put the wind up Cian and induced him to take that Epi-Pen -and BTW, in your head, do you pronounce this the same as 'Cyan' (si-ANN') the blue-green colour we often associate with television, printers and other electrically produced pixels?

Yes, please, seriously contemplate rewriting this. Anything that gets it finished is a good plan in my book.
Aservis Roturier chapter 23 . 2/6/2017
Yes. HELL yes!
hittocere chapter 23 . 4/4/2016
I have so much love for this fic, I'd love to see the rewrite and it hosted that way we can see your progress as well as see the updates!

I remember more than a few sleepless nights reading and chuckling so hard at this fic. Please continue in whatever way suits you best, its wonderful.
TimeLadyofthenight chapter 6 . 1/14/2016
*realizes that Cian's initials are CL and it's pronounced Ciel* YOU ARE EVEN MORE OF AN AMAZING AUTHOR! (if that's even possible)
GloomyPearl chapter 23 . 12/10/2015
I remember I used to love this story to bits! If rewriting it could give you the inspiration you need to continue the story then I'd say go for it! :)
morlana chapter 23 . 9/21/2015
I'd reread it.
Midori chapter 23 . 9/21/2015
To answer your question-yes, if you think that's the way you want to write, by all means do it. Personally I'll be looking forward to this story in any form you choose for it.
Paxloria chapter 23 . 9/20/2015
Let me be clear on this, since I only get 1 review and I don't want any missunderstandings on this Author Note reply:
DO WHATEVER IT TAKES TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!
Your loyal readers have been waiting a LONG time to find out what happens next.
So!
The best thing to do is to write a good story that you can finish. Whether you quit this to write a new version or just pick up where you left off, don't foor get to think aboutthe 3rd option:
Would it be possible to just edit and repost the existing chapters?
Can you both write a new version of this story AND contunue the current version?
~ I would be happy to read both.

See, its like this:
There was this other GREAT story that was written by another author, only that one was a KUROSGITSUJI and OURAN HIGH SCHOOL HOST CLUB crossover, anyway... it started out really great and then that author took a VERY long break from writting. When that author came back to his story he desided to change somethings before continuing with the new chapters.
The sad thing was that there was nothing wrong with those first chapters!
They were awesome.
The changed versions weren't bad, but they weren't as good as they used to be so when I read them I couldn't help but compare the old with the new and like the old better.

With that experience in mind...
Honestly, while I agree that a few minor things could be improved in the earlier chapters of this story (I think I left some critiques on that, especially on this strange last demon) I am a bit afraid of what changes a new version would have.
So please, go easy and steadilly, and please please PLEASE continue the story to the best of your ability using whatever method will work the best, because I love your writting and I love your story.
I never stopped liking this story and have even re-read what there is of it a several times.

Keep on being a great story teller!
promocat chapter 23 . 9/20/2015
sure! i would love for you to restart & then continue!
Carrie2sky chapter 23 . 9/20/2015
I'd be interested in a re-write if that meant you would be able to update. This is one of my favorite Kuro fics and I'd love to see you finish it! Either way so long as you can finish it I'd be happy!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I am very sad that you haven't continued this, it was one of my favourite pieces of fanfiction. Your character development and attention to detail is a rare and beautiful quality that is usually found lacking in fanfiction but your craft appears so professional. The day that I see an alert for the update will be a happy one albeit rare, I think.
EchizenRyomaLover chapter 22 . 4/24/2013
Oh god, I haven't gotten back to this fic in years! I swear it had never left my mind. Even though there were times when I would forget the plot completely, I would always remember the name "Cian" at the very least. This is one of THE most epic Kuroshitsuji fics I have ever read. The dialogue is genius, with loose references to canon that are vague enough to remain semi-AU (I actually had to reread a few parts. Hahaha, I'm that slow.) The narration is also extremely beautiful, with variations of simplicity and complexity in detail that always keep me entertained. Most of all, the SebaCiel romance is elegant, with both of them dancing around each other coupled with mild moments of humor to keep us fluff-loving fans on our heels for more. Please tell me you haven't abandoned this fic. I hope my review will somehow motivate you to continue. I have seriously been meaning to read this sooner, but procrastination and other things came up. PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS. I am amazed by your genius. I honestly love this. I hate to see it die. I must know what happens in the end. :((((
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