Cool

More! More! More! can you write a sequel or something in which this amanda gets to know all about the SGC?

What a nice little gem I somehow missed.

I loved it! I get the feeling that she's made more than a few jealous over the years.

Heehe, I loved this one but you did jump point of view in the middle if it when you suddenly injected Jack's thoughts into the story. You should stick with only One POV durring a scene or if you want to switch make it a perminant switch.

I'm not criticizing, I just wish that someone had told me this much earlier on in my writing. If you have any questions let me know. And I still do it sometimes much to the annoyance of my betas.

Kelli

Mum you win! This one is great!

I really hope I can do that to some people someday :P

The best bit is that Sam and Jack don't even say anything :D

More!

T x

Doesn't jealousy just make the best enemies. Our sg-1 people have nothing to prove. Too bad Amanda doesn't. Enjoyed the story.

Awesome. Loved it. Deserving of a sequel;)

-EarthBug

I like it. :) It's always good when people like Amanda get their comeuppance, and that was certainly the way to do it! Nice story.

I like stories like this where women have no clue how good Sam really has it.

*lmao*

They all deserve it ... ;-)

THX

God bless you!

Thara

nice one...liked how Amanda found out the details without Sam or Jack saying a word...wonder how many of us have an Amanda in our lives...too bad...really enjoyed it...cute take.

Oh that one was cute. Do another one.

I'm gald you ended it like that. Almost thought she would never get to know the truthn and swallow that bitch air about her.

Very enjoyable, always love those "How do you like me know?" stories.