its..uh...i cant say anything..just beautiful

This is such a wonderful story. I really love this fic.
The last part of the story really made me cry after I realized that a certain boy(as we know who is this certain person) risked his own life just to save his beloved. *sniff*
Although this story ended with a very sad ending, I can still see that their is still a happy ending hidden in it.
Hope to read more LenKahoko from you next time.

So I was looking at my favorites fic list and found this at the end of it and decided to read it once again for ol' times sake. All I have to say is every time I pass by this beautiful fan fiction it never ceases me to make me tear up. This is truly one of the most amazing one-shots ever written in the history of fan fiction. Really something worth reading and sharing.

Wow, I think I could cry. I wish there was more back story about what happened and all, but I think it's beautifully written.

Can't believe people can't understand a subtle ending and what happened. -_- Should be obvious. How old are these fanfic readers? The beauty of the story is that she knew what happened even before they said -blank- is dead.

Anyway, great work. The symbolism was amazing and Hino's awareness was just so sad and heartbreaking.

Tears suddenly...damn, I knew it. But for someone to suddenly confirm it and then to top it off, those words.

That was beautiful *sniff*

Beautiful. Enough said. ))))

ehh? i don't get the story was geart an all but the bit confused me was wat happened if the car didn't hit her

What happened to Len is he dead? :O

hope he isnt! :'(

Awwwwww the last part made me cry. So sad and awesome :) Hope next you should make a happy ending :)

gaaaaah

what a sad short fic, i almost cried in the end!

good story, btw.

This is beautiful.

I had to read it over and over again to really understand the story. It's like a puzzle. But after I finished this puzzle, the feeling was great. Breath-taking. And I had found tears on my study table while reading this. It's entirely fresh, and the plot doesn't take up that much (settings, duration) but you managed to keep it magical.

It's perfect.

Thank you for writing this! It's such a good experience for me to read this kind of excellent fanfic! Wish you well!

~Eat and Fly

it took me 5 minutes before I was enable to recover... every time I read len's words "Your true place is where I don't belong to anymore... Wake up, Hino...Wake up..." it makes my heart ache... all I could say is, good work!

POOOR KAHOKO AND LEN!

TT-TT

Oh I knew it would lead this way, but still.. Its very hard to hold back my tears...

So if the house had been finished, would Len and Kaho have lived happily ever after then? Although that's not what Len had wanted after what he'd been through to save her, but still no one wants to face a tragic such a this right.. The scenes where Len whispered to Kaho and when Kaho hummed Ave Mare are just so heartbreaking..

Good job, keep on writing! (please try a happy ending one next time, okay? :) )