Oye, que historias tan maravillosas, me encantaron, sus tramas muy originales, veo que llevas mucho tiempo sin escribir, ojalá lo vuelvas hacer tienes mucho talento y nos regales más historia de este personaje tan increíble como lo es Jacob.

Awwwww, lovely. A happy ending.

Wow. The story is great.

Off to a great start. I just found this story, looking forward to what's next. I have to say, for someone not too long out of college, at 23, with a huge boatbuilding business already making him successful, and another business in marine repairs, Jake surely has moved fast. Just a tad unrealistic, but for the sake of the story, I'll suspend reality.
Looks like a wolf-free stor. Maybe. I'll read on...

Beautiful story! I loved every bit of it!

I think we could all guess what happebed to him.

Ok Ted and his family, even Alice sound like the biggest biggot's in the world. Why would she even associate with these people. They sound fucking awful. Fuck even her own mother sounds awful.

As he should. He is a teenage boy after all.

Ok what the hell happened?

i loved you story, especially the couldnt of finished anny better

Wow your such an amazing author! I've enjoyed reading your stories and hope you finish the last one you have posted on your profile!

Wow your such a

AMAZING STORY KEEP WRITING!

So beautifully angst filled. Very real.

God i have you this is one of the best stories i have ever read
you are amazing
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