This story is absolutely hilarious.

This was so ridiculously funny I laughed at least 5 minutes. I would love to read parts of this from Nathaniel's or Kitty's pow.

This was such a great story. I'm glad I found it!

This was very well done. You took on Bartimaeus's voice really well. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. :)

I'm so glad I stumbled upon this, such fantastic work! Your take on Bartimaeus' narration is amazingly well done and the humor was just right. Thank you for sharing.

A satisfying ending! All's well that ends well?

The plot was hard to believe and did not fit the typical serious and dark theme that the series have. Bart made a lot of silly mistakes and sometimes speaks like a young teenager rather than a 5000 year old djinni but it's all fun and good! The cause of the death for those night police is hilarious, very creative explanation for it too, blaming it all on the umm apocalyptic pizza.

Very cute interaction between Kit and Nat. however, they did not get that much screen time. It's more of Bart here on this fic and his silly little schemes and attempt at matchmaking. My favorite is the love poem!

I wasn't so convinced with the romance between kit and nat here, but I suppose this is leaning toward on comedy more than romance. :)

Barty's poem is so beautiful. I mean it! It made me laugh uncontrollably! and I'm at work! You did a great job as always. Your fic has all the humor that was lacking from the series. The series is enjoyable and funny, yes, however, there were a lot of serious stuff going on too which limited the humor. I love that this fic is lighthearted. I love all the character interactions, especially the banter between Nat and Bart.

Your Barty is amazing. With random snippets from his loooong life in the form of footnotes. The story is also good because its not overly sappy. It is touching without being overdramatic and is very hilarious.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
THAT WAS AWESOME!

This is really good, it's very similar to how Stroud writes himself, engaging and helps me pass the time while I wait for the next Bart. too. Cheers, keep it up!

Ooh, I just adore your writing style! I applaud you! Yes, this is absolutely fantabulous, thank you!

That was awesome! They were all amazingly IC, and I was totally cracking up. Wonderful job on your grammar and spelling.

And then makepeaces plot succeeded, heralding a new dark age for humanity. Not to be a downer, but if they left the country they probably would not have been able to stop the plot. Great story though, I really enjoyed it!

For some queer reason that I cannot fathom, I seem to have taken a liking to Bartimaeus' poem LOL

Excellent story, very humorous!