Reviews for Ode to Sin
Trash chapter 4 . 10/21/2017
So I know it's been 6 years since this has been updated but I couldn't resist making a pun sooooo, in reference to the late line ode says, I guess you could say it's been a bizarre adventure- okay I'll leave now
a perfectionist chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Hey, i hate to be a perfectionist but... Martha's tattoos in Brotherhood are green, not purple. I'm not going to lie but you kind of got my hopes up...because personally i like the 2003 anime over Brotherhood, and almost every fanfic i read is Brotherhood. Don't take this the wrong way, your story is great, but continuity errors are one of the major errors in most fan fictions (besides Mary Sue characters) and i really find them annoying. Other than that, love the first chapter!
BananaChips chapter 13 . 11/16/2015
...Yeah so about that update XD DEAR GOD AUTHOR! UPDATE D:
It's always the good stories that get discontinued! It's not fairrrrrr!
I did read on your profile that you would have an update, but that was back in January XD
BUT HEY, an update would be like the perfect Christmas gift. Just saying.
I mean do you KNOW how hard it is to find a good Greed/Oc/Ling story?...It's pretty hard. While I am here for the romance, your OC has me extremely curious. I would LOVE to know what happened to her in the past. GAH, the suspense!

Hope one day to see an update ;D
Fruitlessberry chapter 13 . 1/23/2015
I like it :D
CDR. Grae chapter 13 . 11/3/2014
Please updateee! I wanna know whtt happened next! What happened to Greed dammit?! I'm so desperate to find out now! Please post the next chapter! Greed should show up soon! What will happen if Ling and him joined bodies and he forgot about Ode? Argh the suspense!

I have to admit, Ode is a likable OC. And there are only a few likable OCs in the world of fanfiction, so kudos to you! :D

UPDATE SOOOOONNNNN!
Omeganixtra chapter 4 . 5/9/2014
Ode is too innocent... Way too innocent
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And I love it!
Omeganixtra chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Awww... Ode's cute!
deideiblueeyez chapter 4 . 4/5/2014
Well! That escalated quickly o.o
Mybfflisazombie chapter 13 . 2/3/2014
This fic hasn't been updated in four year, which is upsetting because it's such a great fic.

This is probably the best fma OC fic that I've read. For one- the main character Ode is absolutely adorable. She's a great mix of good character traits while still having her own flaws. And as a main character she isn't just one who just fades into the background. She has her own story and her own problems which are original to her and not the same as the people around her (cough Elrics cough).

Secondly, the plot is interesting. Both a mix of mystery and adventure with humour and angst in the mix. The scene where Winry and Ode have the heart-to-heart was probably my favourite, I even teared up a little. It's so nice to read an OC get along with Winry and for her to be in character too.

As well all the characters so far have been in character, especially Ed which is the character that most people end up writing wrong. I applaud you- it's not an easy job and you've done so well.

Anyways I hope that one day you'll finish or continue this fic as I'd love to read about Ode's journey.
PanicAttacker chapter 5 . 1/2/2014
Hahahahahaha, that chapter was precious! I was sittin here wondering if she actully kicked someone's head off, and it turns out to be Al! Genius move on your part!
Secret Keeper-Kipa chapter 13 . 12/19/2013
Hi, I just started reading your story, and it's a great plot! I'm really keen to know what happens next. Please update soon!
Molly Grace 16 chapter 13 . 8/23/2013
This is an interesting story. I like Ode. She's so innocent. It's cute.
RyokoSon chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
You said you were going to write the next chapter!
WHAT HAPPENED?! DX
Yuki Suou chapter 13 . 7/16/2013
Please don't abandon
LinIsSleepy chapter 13 . 7/3/2013
I love Ode and I hope you update soon. I'm excited for some more Ling and Greed!
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