okay so there are a lot of instances when characters freak out or get angry when someone implies that they might be LGBTQ and i think its supposed to be hilarious but as someone who genuinely loves this story: thats hella not cool :/

God Noelle is good. she's just the best without even having to say much. i love that you can bring so much to a character who litetally has like three lines in this chapter!

Poor Vincent! He's getting yelled at because he took a bullet.. Talk about mixed signals.

Oh my gosh! You really had me there!

Poor Vincent... And James... And Luke...

Ahh.. The Rouge Glare, almost as powerful as the BatGlare.

I love Logan's nicknames for everyone!

Great story so far! It's really great how you created so many new characters! It is really hard to do that but you did great!

re-reading this and this is /still/ one of my absolute favorite chapters. By the way, it is quite rare for me to re-read a story (especially this being the third time) and I would just like you to know that your story is expertly written, the dialogue is flawless, and I literally walk through school /craving/ to keep reading this. You were actually the one that inspired me to start writing so much and I think following your example has /greatly/ improved my own writing skills. I would /love/ to read more of this stories sequel.

You have a gift and I can only hope that you pursue it. Write on! ;D

Hey.. You are a pretty good writer. I liked the first Chapter. Good job

Read five more chapters. Really liking how Noelle and Vincent are turning out. Noelle was nothing, but a mystery girl at first. Now she seems to be quite witty, intelligent, caring, and nefarious. I definitely enjoy how she picks on Vincent.

Then there is actual Vincent. The poor guy's plans are falling out from under him. With nothing to stand on he's being forced to adapt and figure out a new strategy. Thus in the meanwhile he's becoming more aware of all the other students and learning things about them. I profusely appreciate the forced relationship Vincent and Lucien have. I can't wait to see where that goes. I do ponder about Vincent's repetitive nightmares, yet I'm sure that will show itself in time. I really feel bad for Vincent due to the fact that Noelle is constantly spying on him by reading his emotions. A girl with that power is definitely one I would never want to live with.

As for your writing in general I am in love with all of your descriptions and your expansive vocabulary. I have a special place in my heart for uncommon words.

Venks/Chris same thing.

Anyways I've read about four chapters thus far. Got a long way to go but thats definitely it for today.

I definitely like what I've read thus far. While I'm definitely a fan of X-men I don't really follow it to the point where I know all the X-men and their villain's normal names so I do tend to get mixed up now and then. Not to mention the continual shift of the protagonist. Though I think its getting easier to understand.

I really enjoy the allegory and general word play. The settings could use a bit more description, but I'm definitely enjoying all of the characters up to this point. Hearing the thoughts of both the assassin and the thief heirs is very interesting. I'm very curious as to how that will play out. Though my money is definitely on them falling in love with each other. This being a romance story and all. Hopefully the transition to that point is less predictable and shows how these feelings build. Looking forward to it!

Great work. The best X-men next Gen Fan fiction, that I ever read.

I found the very enjoyable and interesting, however I feel that Noelle is to overly "able". she doesn't seem to have any real faults nor make the wrong decisions. even Superman made mistakes and he is an overpowered super genius. If you could rectify this the story would be better.

Also for someone who was trained (i.e. tortured) since he could walk to be an assassin, Vincent seems very weak (especially after the horror stories that was told about his training)

However it was still an enjoyable read

A most intriguing eplilogue.

Looking forward to reading "Kestrel"!