... Deep story, I really liked it! Your theory was very well thought out - well done it was great! :)

Great story. Extremely well written and im impressed of how you were able to bring out so much emotion through just words.

Nice job~

WOAH! That was really good. I don't know how you do it? You take my breath away!

Wow... that was extremely well-written and thoughtful! I'm highly intrigued. :)

Oh dear, this reminds me of the first time I fell in love. In retrospect, those were such awkward, pathetic feelings lol

You've done an amazing job at bringing out those emotions (from experience, perhaps?) and putting them in words. Flawless!

It's a pity that this was such a short one-shot. I was enjoying it.

Your grammar and storytelling are good, especially in the beggining.

I was gonna say that Halibel’s insecurity and awkwardness in front of Aizen is very uncharacteristic of her but then I remembered how she babbled his name in chapter 375.

Like I said, it's a shame that this wasn't longer. I think you could have developed more this idea, telling us more about her life as an Espada. Maybe even her feelings during the battle in Karakura.

How sad! ;;

She sees him as god. Now who does that remind me of?