| Reviews for Elevator |
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   freyja0taku chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 hahaha for the last part and some scenes.. It's cute.. yay :3 |
| Sephtir chapter 1 . 10/16/2010 why were they in the basement? |
| Lemon-Chan84 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010 Very nice writing! I love lemony goodness! P You could really feel the tension in the elevator, and the lemon wasn't too trashy or over the top. Keep writing! |
| Anzer'ke chapter 1 . 6/5/2010 Totally wonderful, congrats on this excellent lemon. Peace out and rock on, Anzer'ke. |
| Blehlove chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 I love love love this!I'm a sucker for M rated stories and this one is great. I really like your writing style. Great Work! |
| rokusan23 chapter 1 . 4/22/2010 wo! |
| Scribbleness chapter 1 . 1/15/2010 dude, you totally rock on this one-shot... it's a heated one, but it was so beautifully written! great job! *thumbs up!* :3 |
| XDuskLightDawn chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 This was amazingly written, not too sexy, not to subtle. Loved the ending, you kept everyone in perfect character. |
| TearDropLoverRockabop chapter 1 . 12/4/2009 I loved the ending the most. Made a good giggle. |
| Faythie chapter 1 . 11/21/2009 hahah thats was a great quickie! great job! |
| vLuna chapter 1 . 10/1/2009 That was really great for your first lemon. I'm impressed. It was sweet, hot, sexy and everything was in its place ;D Oh perverted Squall and angry Rinoa. That was fun to read |
| ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie chapter 1 . 9/30/2009 Aww... That was good for your first time! Not that I'm really one to talk... But you know what I mean. A quickie in the elevator, huh? I liked Squall's comment on the 'what-do-you-call-ems.' And Rinoa's 'Cold, hypocritical bastard who'll end up being a hundred-year-old hermit with nothing but his desk and a shredder to keep him company.' That one made me laugh out loud. My brother gave my funny looks. Nice job! 'Til next time! -Valk |
