why didn't you finish the story

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Will the story continue more than just the three chapters? It's so good!

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

Wow. I was really hoping this would continue and was even more disappointed to see this was your only fic! (and its from 2009. Oh lawd, I wish you were still writing)

It is brilliant. Such a great read and you've got a handle on the characters perfectly. The dialogue was fluid and the detail and description was vivid. I could picture everything so well, such a rush of excitement when something *almost* happened between them. Guh! So good.

Ah, this fic was great! I'm relatively new to the world of fanfic, but I'm really picky with plots, grammar, continuity and whatnot, but I really loved this one. Great writing, believable story! (I just kinda wish it was longer, heh heh..) Thanks for this!

-Ven

Dang Author's Note! Anyways I enjoyed it. However, I'd really like to know who Sokka chose.

You have to keep going! Im dying to know what happens between toph and sokka!

You have to keep going! Im dying to know what happens between toph and sokka!

wow what an awesome story! you nailed te characters! cant to wait to read more!

ahh! the dreaded authors note...lol...jk... epic story by the way, a sequel would be freakin awesome and greatly appreciated :) you have very good writing skills and portrayed these two characters very, very well...sorry i didnt review the 2 and 3 chapters :( i got to caught up in the story...then i get slapped in the face with this authors note lol...well anyway, great story...i cannot believe this story hasnt gotten more reviews, it defenetly deserves them :)...once again lol, hope u write some sort of sequel or continuation of this awesomely epic story :)

hahaha, great chapter :)

i think u have sokka and toph's personality and characteristics down really well :)

great work

Really good story, the characters were totally in, erm, character, which is something I love when I read a story - including facfiction - although I am so curious to know who he picks... are you really going to leave me hanging like this. It's almost cruel... :(

Although it is your story so if you want to end then, well, theres not a whole lot I can do about it.

Okay then, will keep an eye out for any other stories by you.

:)

:) lol. Last line was so funny. Sigh. Anyways, am pretty sure in their, uh, world they don't have gods. They have spirits... I think. Might look into that later, but I'm 90% sure they have spirits. Other than that, really liking it. Nice work.

Here you can have another smiley face - :)

Sorry, I do love smileys and when it gets late I tend to ramble on a bit. So sorry again. :)

Why don't you have more reviews? This is brilliant! You portrayed Toph and Sokka wonderfully! ( I would say more, but I'm on a mobile device.). Keep writing!