4 months?! That is way too long for someone to suffer this much. They better rescue her soon or this will be one of the cruelest fics I’ve ever come across. It’s borderline sadistic and quite disturbing so far as it is. Great writing but maybe use your talent for good instead of evil.

Still think she took him back far too quickly but this is the best Twilight fanfic I've read. I was hoping to find talented writers to turn that garbage into something worth reading and was starting to lose hope before I came across yours.

I love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married

Lol, I just reviewed but holy shit. 4 inch stilettos? Why is he in a patients room without a reason? Where are the other mental health professionals? They don't even let you keep your toothbrush outside of certain times. This fic is just bsing for angst.

Yeah, no. Have you ever been in a mental health facility before? This would never happen in a million years. There are several employee's who watch over you and catalog your behavior and sleep schedule hourly. They don't leave you alone in your room with the door closed in case you try to kill yourself and there are cameras everywhere. This is especially true because Bella is a minor so she'd be in a facility with other minors over 13. This is cringe to the max degree.

Hey, just a tip: separate your speaking lines from person to person, as it gets difficult to read.

Very good story, I am obviously a little late on reading it but I loved it. Can't wait to read more of your work and if they delete this story I will follow you over on the other sites. Good job! 3
Alexis 3

This was a great story. Not an easy one to deal with at times but certainly a great one filled with highs and lows. I want to say thank you for sharing this story with us.

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Ashmerlin

I am so excited! I have been looking for this story for years, it was one of the first stories I read on fanfiction that I didn't understand to write the title or even your pen name, so I joined some groups asking for help nut I got some things wrong in my summery so I guess it was hard to locate and low and behold I find you on my own! I will put this in my favorites and recommand it to all my other friends in our groups! Your story is too good to miss. Hate that Bella is where she is but help is coming and I really love the ideal that Rosealie will be one who will help her deal with what is happening to her now.

Thanks for writing this story and leaving it up for us to read. The change you made with the POVs really helped the story's progression and readability. At times the plot was difficult to read purely because of the subject matter. I felt that your writing matured and improved as the chapters progressed. I do hope RL has been kind to you and that your muse inspires your imagination to write again. Best wishes

I wondered is Vic was part of this

She's a cop's daughter. Good on her.

I enjoyed Alice's POV

Enjoyed these two chapters. Thanks

In the hope of helpful critique, the story is very repetative, as each persons point if view repeats the same information, and does not advance the story but every chapter you go back and cover the same thing again. This makes the pace of the story extremely slow