It's a shame you didn't continue this, it was a really good start to a story. I really wanted to find out why Axel left too.

Man you have to update this is an awesome story and the summery and first chapter make me wanna cry when i reread it

Interesting...Please keep going with the story. It was depressing as hell at first, but it seems like Roxas's is getting better. It feels weird that every chapter starts out not knowing whose POV it is, but it doesn't take long to figure out I guess. So yeah. :)

I apologize because I wish I could read this story to have more comments regarding the story in itself, but Superkawaiifreak brought this to my attention and I looked into it.

Lord Kelvin's main concern is people rating M rated stories as K and plaggin the minds of little children. When you read his LJ, his concern isn't lemon/yaoi/lime/hentai/yuri. When posting a story that contains pornographic material, it is against rules to begin with, and he doesn't even address that. He goes on to point out that regular "illegal" stories generally have 64 infractions on a 100 scale.

Like it's great that you pointed this out, but he doesn't give a shit very often if the story is in the M rated section and has decent grammar. RedBotton is just a lot to do with people that swear in their story descriptions (which isn't allowed), use "R&R" to promote their stories (which isn't allowed), use Author's Notes (which also isn't allowed), and have REALLY BAD GRAMMAR.

So... really... read his LJ. Don't worry about this and worry everyone else about it, because there's really no point.. most of us who write lemons are going against the rules no matter what, that's nothing new. And if it's taken 6 years for them to delete any of my stories, I think that's long enough.. RedBotton has been in production since before 2007.

i completely agree with you on this subject. The only problem is, Lord Kelvin IS an administrator. That's why the many emails sent out have been ignored. Lord Kelvin used to be a good reviewer, like he would give some really good constructive critisism about grammar and the likes, but nowadays, he just flames for jo reason other than it may havr one tiny author's note or a few misspelled words here and there. Ironically, this guy's profile picture says, "I AM NOT A VILLAIN" Isn't that the biggest load of shit you've ever seen?

i kind of want to leave a review (on Lord Kelvin's stories) that has terrible grammar, chatspeak, and horrible spelling. Childish, but it feels good (or at least that's what I think it'd feel like since I've never actually done it...and my account would probably be deleted since this corrupt psychopath is a fricking ADMINISTRATOR).

-Scor

Why don't you actually speak to the LU members, instead of relying on someone else's word? They can probably explain it better than anyone else.

i really love this story please continue soon i wanna know why he left.!

fanfiction is serious business!

What! I don't even get this, omg I want to cry :( what is this?

So have they finally starting parading around in the KH fandom? If so, that's my cue to exit.

Can't wait for the next chapter. ;D

Oh I like it. Sure there was a lack of Axel and Roxas, but it was interesting either way ;] I feel so bad for Namine. I mean, if she really is going to crack, that must be horrible!

OH MY GOSH, when the fuck did this chapter came out? I read chapter nine already, and I'm thinking, "Dang, is this a flashback? And who the fuck is narrating?" Then I clicked 'back' and saw that there was a chapter that I've yet to read. I'm sorry it's taken me sooo long to review chapter 8, it was a great one. I enjoy reading from Roxas's point of view, though you have a tendency to switch to third person sometimes. For instance: "he touched the boy's blond hair, then I said, what are you doing?" It can be slightly confusing, so try to edit those parts over.

So, first of all, I really hate Sora in this story. He's such an infantile, not to mention impudent. But, I'm guessing that his rebellious behavior, along with Riku's bitchiness, is valid to the plot of this story... So, I'm not too angry about their oddities. Aha. I'm still having this idea about Riku.. Honestly, I've read soooo many Akuroku stories as of late, and I'm having a hard time differentiating them, so excuse me if I say something that doesn't relate to this story at all. I mean, when I see "Remembering Axel Update" in my inbox, I piss my pants becaue I fucking love this story, but I have a tendency to get my thoughts jumbled up. And don't worry about updating late, an update is an update, right? I think Namine might be jealous of Roxas & Axel's past? Because when Rox showed up to dye his hair, she was all, "Oh Great, roxas... greeaaat..." You know? And sorry if this review is just full of pretty words, I'm just shitt tired, but I wanted to give you a good review. You've inspired me to go add another chapter to my own story, bahaha, so thank you. I needed a little kick in the ass... But anyway, consider this review for both chapter 8&9, but there's always the possibility of receiving another one for chapter nine... Probably when I'm not as tired.

So, namine's bipolarity kinda pisses me off, but has me wondering as to what you've got stirring in your head for this story. Either way, I'm intrigued and extremely eager to learn and read more!

Oh, and I know you have a a beta, but I Did get confused a few times while reading... You need to whip this new beta, I say, ahaha! Just kidding XD But really, tell them to give it another once-over, because there were a few sketchy parts. Well, have a great day, and remember that you're an amazinggg author. AND I LOVE THIS STORY. AND YOU. Heheee.

-SKF

Ah! So there /is/ more to it.

Demyx and Marluxia are brothers? Hn, wasn't expecting that.

Pfft, Zexion was awesome haha!

And Reno! lmao. Poor Marly got molested.

There were a bunch of tiny little hints in here that are gonna become really important, and I'm really looking forward to seeing how they play out.

Rofl Reno's such a perv! I can totally see him doing something like thaaaaat! Love thiiis