I like it

I saw this story and i clicked on it and i was done on chapter 8 (yeah i read fast. sue me, actually don't) then i was gettin excited and i was click the next button... except it wasn't there and i yelled out "Fuck" on accident... :_: my bro and sis heard me '.'

Update! Plz?

nooo! i love your story! please keep writing! please with fang on top? ;)

keep writing

Cool Story.

nononononononono! it sooo doesnt suck! i luv it! plz update!

Pretty good. I like the plot and i think i know what might happen. but i saw a lot of spelling and grammar problems.

Such as: Maybe was spelled maby. Also there were alot of words like cake and ckae. So don't mean to be rude or anything. Update soon please!

that was so good! i love it! please write more!

Please update soon! I wanna know what Max's news is! Great chapter by the way. I liked it :)

ooh we now have a collision course between the two so you keep updating and i will keep reviewing so k bye

good first chap and keep writing and updating this story it is good

*cough* Sure it's their stomachs they think with...?_- Just one suggestion, maybe you should spellcheck your work before you post it, as I'm noticing a lot of spelling errors. Haha, have you read the Outsiders? Chocolate cake... M, just reminded me, it's pretty good, I would love to read more!

~Alice-chan

i like it... but i liked fangs chapter better but still it was good...update soon

Hmm... I don't like it that much as other fanfics that I read but I'll see if you can change that.