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HyperspaceGamer chapter 5 . 7/3/2017 Even if Kin has somehow become immune to gravity (something that I personally think is stupid, but that's just me and don't take it to heart), she wouldn't exactly be immune to Shinra Tensei. While she may be immune to the purely gravitational-force side of it, anything caught in the jutsu's path, including the wind itself, would still affect her. So, while Shinra Tensei may not affect her in the traditional sense, the outcome would be indistinguishable as the wind in Shinra Tensei's path that was being pushed/pulled by the gravitational force would lead to the same, intended result. Well, unless she becomes immune to the wind as well... and then he could just start chucking trees or other parts of the terrain at her. |
Juhoni chapter 5 . 2/8/2015 Interestin story. Update soon. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015 Type your review for this chapter here... |
Devilslayer94 chapter 5 . 2/15/2012 Awesome story, lovin the rin'negan naruto and how he isnt an all powerful god. The stuff with the women is funny as hell too, along with kin and her new "ability" (i guess is what you would call it). Im curious though, is this a harem fic or just a single girl pairing? |
Fuck you chapter 1 . 2/3/2011 Changing it to Shikato just makes you a lazy asshole who doesn't care enough to put any effort into this. And Zagger is complete bullshit and a cheap cop-out instead of actually trying to write a decent story. Not gonna waste my time reading a story even the author doesn't care about. |
nicklaren chapter 5 . 12/11/2010 very nice chapter please update soon |
Cloves chapter 5 . 9/2/2010 Interesting fic. naruto with rinnegan, Whoa kin will be immune to Shinra Tensei? I have another question though when will you update it again? Its been 3months already since you last updated it. please update it soon.. |
pyro357 chapter 5 . 7/2/2010 update soon |
god of all chapter 5 . 6/17/2010 Great chapter and story so far pleases continue this story soon. |
MsQueenWitch chapter 5 . 6/12/2010 i like it but i'm majorly confused and asking why with the kin situation since it makes no sense... and its left me to confused to enjoy.l. cause your story is not maybe gelling the way you want it to...i mean the idea seems good but right now you have to many holes in the story and its not making sense. For example..you stated the three boys were the best of friends and seemed to get along and you would think they would all be on the same team from what you infered in the beginning of the story then there is nothing about how they were friends no flashbacks nothing to show/cement that they were.. the only thing you are cementing is he has a lot of girls after him.. it seems that that is the main point of the story so far instead of the new eye power the twee his friends and the point.. the story jumping to orchi so fast does not make sense..like i said a good idea but seems you are going about it the wrong way cause i like the idea but not loving the story...sorry... Ja Ne |
MsQueenWitch chapter 1 . 6/11/2010 decided to try this story I"m liking it so far although i'm not a fan of the ino/naruto pairing.. my problem is i don't like women who are bitches and hit people all the time cause that's abuse and i don't believe in abusive relationships in any way shape or form...so i ususally don't like to read about them.. but i like the story so far.. i won't promise to keep reading it if your character goes that direction cause it will turn me off. ja ne |
Still Not Dead Yet chapter 5 . 5/30/2010 The improvement in control is very impressive. I wonder what the fang is for? The conversation with Kurenai was interesting also. As always I look forward to your next update! |
Elemeffayoh chapter 5 . 5/23/2010 oh so now that she is somewhat immune to those attacks of the rinnengan Orochimaru is gonna use her? but what about Pein? how will her abide then? |
RyanRendan chapter 5 . 5/22/2010 I never realized that Shinra Tensei had such a... strange translation. It's just a mouthfull. Have fun with that, English-adaptation. On a side note, world leader's should be world leaders'... Later. |
geetac chapter 5 . 5/22/2010 I like the chapter. |