Love this

Wow thats cool! :D

That's cute at the every end! :D

this one was really good love brotherly moments

this is good

You jerk, you actually made me cry, I seriously thought one of them was going to die and started crying. You seriously need to finish the last 2 chapters or maybe I'll just be stubborn and bug you till you finish I have to know what happens next

AWE! that was a grea take on the original story with Dean i have been reading them and i begged DeanAndHisImpala to do a Sam one so when i saw yours i was so excited! i really loved this! it was written differently and i liked the different take, yours is more about how sick he is and physically being ill. I loved the nightmare you put in im a sucker for that kind of thing. I laughed so hard when Dean say "you slimmed on me" hahahahaa! oh it was so sweet when Dean was rambling such a worried big brother kind of thing!

I LOVE this :D

amazing as always Lee. The end line was a punch, worked seriously! At first I was confused, didnt know which one is which but then I went *GASP* it's a bonding spell, wow! You did great, can't wait for broken.

Love it hon!

these boys break my heart 3

Wow, intense. I think this isn't just a regular story. This is really their curse. One has the injuries, but the other suffers. One goes to hell and the other dies inside. I think that's what makes this story so special, even so it is a witches curse and reversible, it reflects their lives. Hugs, Vonnie

That chapter was so awesome great job.

awww the boys are unbearable cute

Wow, gasp, stutter... I got to get it together here, because I have to find the right words to express what I feel now. I'm really stunned, because Sam's fear was so real, maybe because I had no idea he was poisoned, but I sure knew something was terribly wrong. Dean couldn't be dead, I knew this much, yet it felt real. The fog reaching, touching Sam, the fear for Dean and the shock of seeing him dead, the moment of reality and almost comfort, just to be pulled away from it again. Intense fear, so palpable, it was scary. And waking up at Bobby's, realizing what happened and the way Dean almost lost it, when he talked about it, pure chick flick, as it was Dean's way of saying, 'I love you Sammy and I couldn't stand almost loosing you.' Awesome story, well worth the wait, but I hope I won't have to wait that long for the next one. Hugs, Vonnie

Wow that was pretty intense I really enjoyed it. Great job..