That would have been an awesome v-day for anyone! Loved it!

I really like what you wrote! You have made a 360 degree turn to those cute characters and it was marvelous... please keep on writing!

hey make these fanfictions even more sexy

YOUR AWESOME AT WRITING THESE!
HOPE YOU MAKE MORE!

If i dont leave a flame , will you pm and me and lemme know your facebook so i can add you as my friend :)) your story is kind of perverted but i like it :))

Nice sneak attack ;)

Is Natsume considered a flamer? He makes flames. You know, lights peoples hair on fire and shit. So technically speaking, he is a flamer. I rather enjoy flames. Not on my skin, but fire's pretty damn cool. Blah, blah, blah, I like your story, blah, blah, blah. Uuuuum, I guess the story could be longer? For God's sake (sorry religious people), I can't think of anything negative (or positive) to say. I have a hard time reviewing, 'cause I sit there and I'm like "Oh, this part's fantastic. I kind of dislike this part. Oops, there's a grammatical error. Hahaha, I gotta review this shit!", and then I click review and my mind blanks. I literally cannot remember the story. For instance, this one: Natsume had to leave for a convention thingy. It's Valentines day. Mikan has a job? Natsume sneaks up on her. Turns out he did NOT go to the convention. "But the convention was so important to you." "Not as important as you." Love, love, love. Uuuum, talking, talking, gross, gross, Mikan doesn't get her beauty sleep, ends up ugly, uuuuuum. The end. So I don't literally forget EVERYTHING, but I do get confused. Don't get me wrong, I'm pretty sure I found this story good. I feel like I laughed somewhere in there, but you know what? I don't remeeeeeebeeeeeer. My emotions and opinions for this story are out on a lunch break. As soon as I go off of this site I'm gonna remember EVERY-F**KING-THING. 'Cause my brain is a douche. Bye.

wait? when natsume came in the door wasnt locked so when they went to mikan's offie, did they lock it before they went in? cuz if they didn't and someonr didn't know andwent in ans then heard the moaning and went in to the office, wouldn't that be awkward?

Yea Natume would ditch it to be with Mikan and do it with her

I love it! Make more! :D

) he is so sexy

Now that is MA!~

Wow! Good job in there. . . .]

...the end was okay

lol, last part is funny

thissucked ...in a very provocativ(sp) way