Author-san, did you actually turned this in for your teacher to read?

well, its lovely for me, make another will ya?

3333 Pure love 33333

Sweet read. Now I know the stem of mushroom tastes like vanilla.

I'm addicted to your writing style and the story. Great work!

Tsk, naughty Hibari-chan...

Is it possible to put CUTE and SEX(y)UAL together? While the piece is short and has much sexual hint, I think you capture their romance perfectly.

Although, I can't imagine ever turning something like this in. ...Maybe keep it as a light(-erotic) short reading under my bed, but that's it. I'd be embarrassed to show it off. Especially to my teachers. Who are going through menopause. And would not have obviously understood. (No offense. XD)

I've never thought of 8018 ._.

Really.

Usually, the only thing in my head when someone mentions Yamamoto, is 8059.

I just found out about this pairing and its ..

just so awesome xD

Write more, I'll appreciate it! :D

Love your writing style

teehee, it's so cute :)

it's a good story, and you don't need to worry about character recognition. as long as people like it, you're good to go!

adorably written

I love your writing~

Oh wow, quite well written It totally was in character! Nice job done!

Oh my God, I love this so much~~! You're always so good with these - I don't know what it's called, but you kind of 'sum up' the relationship, or describe it (...is there a name for this?) and you do it so damn well!

They feel in-character even though you add these little details about Hibari. I love it!

I've already favved your other 8018s, and I'll definitely fav this one too ;D

Ok, I have a confession to make: I absolutely hate 8018. With a burning passion. I'll write and ship 8059 until the day I die. However, the summary of the fic caught my attention, so I read.

And you know what? I'm glad I did. Whatever you think, they were in character, especially hibari, and I thought it was pretty obvious who they were. In short, I really really liked it! I hope you keep writing 8018, and I'll keep Reading it.

Thanks for opening my eyes!

i coud tell, by the violence and perfectionism that it was hibari :3

awe so cute.

atleas tim hoping thats who bc i dont know all the numbers...I personally dont get it x.x;

is tfhat an epic fail?

lol whatever.

it was fucking awseome.

if i handed something like that in my teacher would call me a whore adn send me to the principals office...

xD

not that it stops me