Reviews for Biology |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Do you have any future plans to continue this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I understand why you stopped the story! All the characters, except for Harry and a couple of Muggles cause persistent feeling Gallinago disgust, including Severus. The plot is very interesting, and although the length of the chapters somewhat... disappointing, to say the least, the plot drags. But because of the disgust almost all the characters to read the story very difficult, almost impossible. You are very talented author! So accurately describe and convey what should be the plot and logic - this is a real talent. Although I don't understand what Harry (James) came back. Why? When he could make a new Muggle documents and go to the same English-speaking America, where he would have found no Dumbledore. This is probably the only moment in history, which I was unable to understand... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron and hermione are faking the injury |
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![]() ![]() ![]() loved the three chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter. I like this story and look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup .. enjoyed immensely ... looking forward to more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do enjoy the story. I am just wondering at your using paragraphs as chapters. It tends to make the story a harder read, due to starts and stops.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused... Biology is not Science in this AU? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, very well done, wonder if they will run into anyone they know while there. |
![]() ![]() Ah, Dumbles, as interferring as usual. Nothing has changed over the years. I don't understand why the Weasleys are asking? demanding? Dumbledore's help in resolving any troubles they are having with Harry/James. He left without telling them. That would sort of indicate to me that there was a reason and any 'attempt' at reconciliation should come from the one that left. James has already said repeatedly that he didn't want to return to the Wizarding World so whatever situation? events? that led to James leaving, they're still present. And reasons for being incommunicado with the Weasleys is still there as well. Sorry, Dumbles is up to something. Even if it is just being a nice old man wanting to help resolve a difficult situation between some people he thinks highly of, some relationships just can not be mended. Hermione's pushiness doesn't help nor does Ginny's fangirl attention or Ron's bigotry. Of course, Dumbles could have some nefarious plan that will take chapters to slowly be revealed *grin* Soemtimes I do wish that your chapters were bigger. |