I really hoped Evarinya would be together with Eragon... Maybe in further chapter?

Hey! Great chapter! I wonder if the mysterious elf guy could by any chance be Vanir... Anyway, can't wait for the next update! xoxo

good job. very itneresting

Hey! I just read your story and I totally love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo

I thought it was a great idea still do as a matter of fact and you do have room to improve.

Your humble fan,

Aren the Saphire Emerald

I think your story is fine, you just need to add a LOT more detail, and make he chapters longer. Also try putting in more of the characters feelings. It makes the story more realist and easier for tue reader to relate to. YOU HAVE A GREAT Plot! Don't le it go to waste! Continue the story I have faith In you, so don't turn me down! Feel free to pm me!

Great! I love it. Inheritance Cycle ROCKS! Have you ever read Ranger's Apprentice? You really should. The series is by John Flanagan. D

This is interesting indeed... Update soon.