| Reviews for Coming Closer |
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RunsWithWolves77 chapter 18 . 1/19/2019 I usually don't like to read incomplete stories but this one grabbed me. I do hope there will be an ending sometime. |
Takerslady chapter 18 . 1/11/2019 Good, glad Jake realized he’d found his person, they just need to be friends, Bella has just stomped on him too much for them to be anything more, she does things without thinking about anyone else, in three years she couldn’t call or write to Charlie? Too selfish. She should be with Ian and Jake should move on with Lana. Plus she’s still taking the Cullen’s money, she didn’t t have to be with her family, it was her choice. |
Takerslady chapter 13 . 1/11/2019 Omg really? She cheated on her husband and left him and had the nerve to be mad at him for because she followed him to Alaska! Omg! The worst! That bonfire drama was amaze balls! |
Takerslady chapter 12 . 1/11/2019 Well that’s what you get for marrying the Leech Bella hahah lol |
Takerslady chapter 8 . 1/11/2019 What how is she not a virgin? Was she having sex with that corpse she was running after!? |
rburt1973 chapter 18 . 3/26/2018 Are you still writing this story? I came across it and fell in love with your change of the bella /Jacob romance! Let me know one way or then other if you are writing this wonderful heartbreaking story. |
iamalphagirl chapter 18 . 1/15/2018 Oh my goodness please update this! I don’t know if I want to cry or be happy I found this fanfic but please update! |
djmagic21 chapter 1 . 1/7/2018 I'm still waiting for this story to update this story always made me cry I can feel the pain as if it were my own please please update I know its been a long time but I know you can do it I have faith in you |
chowchow053 chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 Please don't give up on this story! It's REALLY good. |
Joymel chapter 15 . 6/21/2017 Jacob talking to Lana while in Bella's bedroom - goes to show even a wolf can be a dog! |
Joymel chapter 7 . 6/20/2017 Bella has such a short memory. |
Joymel chapter 2 . 6/20/2017 Last line in Chapter 2: Bella - "I was never any good with rejection". Well, she was always good with rejecting Jacob, after she used him of couse |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/12/2017 Oh for fucks sake, give Bella a damn backbone |
MCJwolflover chapter 18 . 5/21/2017 Please write more, I want to know what happens. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2017 This is the best Jake/Bella story on fanfiction , I have been reading fiction for a while and this story is the only one I come back to ! Please finish it , its the best ! |