oh so good this story is awesome!

This is badly written. It just seems surreal and the scenes are not really connected. There is a whole lot missing between the first and second chapter. The plot itself may have merit but first years knowing spells like summoning and secrecy/warding and the whole "they by chance met and are now long lost siblings" is just too weird. It may have been better to include some small incidents of Harry and Draco growing up together and how Harry bonded with the Malfoys and the other Slytherins. Just elaborate in general. I don't have any ideas on how to make the triplet thing not so outlandish and unbelievable. Additionally there are the usual spelling mistakes. So you really should consider getting a beta.

Please Update It Soon!

I like it!

Loving this and would love to read more! ;o)

I know you've adopted this and since your other fic I read didn't have these issues it must be the chapters you got from the original; the storyline seems interesting ( except for someone raping a 6 yr old - wouldn't a severe beating and torture been enough? did it HAVE to be rape of a small child for the plotline to work? especially since the story blows right past it not even stopping to show any attempt to find the person who attacked Harry; seems like just the result of him being jumpy was what was wanted, and a severe beating and some mental games would have been enough for a young child on top of the dursley abuse. )
Please take the time, before adding your own chapters, to go thru and look for the odd spelling issues, i'm sure someone has hit the gryffindor spelling issues in the early chapters, but there are also probs from someone using a spell checker but not really paying attention to what was chosen as replacement... I was laughing so hard at 'divide and concur' that I wasn't able to continue for a bit and it totally threw me out of the story and flashback because I just had this image of dividing people up into small groups to sit around tables until they all agreed and 'concured' instead of conquer in war they were agreeing ( concur means to agree )... in my head the battlefield turned into a conference center during small group meetings ;-)

there were others like this that make a reader stop and think Huh?

When you adopt a story its often a bit of a no-no to make changes to the original story, but in this case I don't think it would be a problem, it's not like there were 20 chapters and major story arcs being changed, just grammer, spelling, and re-analyzing if the rape is necessary to the storyline or if the resulting goal can be achieved w/o jumping to level 10000 right off the bat, that sort of sets a line for bad things happening in the story, and everything else has to be above or below in relation so it seems to possibly make issues in future writing to set the initial bar so extremely high.

anyway, glad you adopted the fic as it does seem interesting and unique and it would like to see where it goes.

thx,
P.

I hope to read more. Thanks
Oh I enjoy you storyline.

Um, it's Gryffindor, not Gryphondore.

i'm sorry but i hate rape stories were the victim never recovers fully, the story was great till this chapter but a harry that is not physically normal at least is just too sad and not thinkable. perhaps i'll comeback when the story is more developped..

I like it

love it

Update soon!

Love the way this chapter has been writing, I hope the rest of the chapters will be just like this, with great detail.

Who attacked Harry when he was young? Who attacked him then? Dumbledore needs to be slapped.

Very interesting story. You do need to double check spelling & grammar however, for example in the last paragraph you have written "art f" instead of "part of"