OMG this is AWESOME! PLEASE write more of it!

ant wait for the next chapter!

As usual, a great chapter. I like the way you show Norm's thoughts. He's in character completely! Can't wait for the next chapter and curious as to what the "holes" will be in Norm's scheme!

This chapter was descriptive, and I liked the flying turtles singing the Mock Turtle soup song.

Wow... that was good! Nice job!

Oh... cool...

Yes! An update. Great chapter.

I'm so happy you updated! This is probably my favorite story of yours. It has such great potential, I can't wait to see what it turns into!

"Butterfly nets?" asked Vicky with a groan. "What kind of crackpot are you?" - A very Vicky reaction. It made me grin.

The chapter was well written, and I am looking forward to future updates.

nice chapter, update soon

...um, hey Jorgen. LEAVING GODKIDS ALONE WHILE THE ANTI'S ARE ON THE LOOSE IS NOT A GOOD IDEA! But hey - it's all in FOP nature...great job, update please!

I was going through your list of stories and I was surprised that I hadn't read/reviewed this one yet. I adore the Turner twins to bits and I thought I'd read all of the fics with them in them. But it appears that I missed one of yours.

I'm disappointed that this one's on hiatus. I quite like where this is going. I especially like that you gave Tommy and Tammy separate personalities. So many people assume they're just separate but equal entities of Timmy, very rarely do they see that they're also partially Tootie or Trixie as well.

I did catch the bit that stated that Tootie's their mom, which is my preferred future pairing. I just think Tootie deserves some love. I mean, Trixie's got a million guys after her but poor Tootie doesn't have a single guy that'll bother with her.

But anyway, back to your story. I agree with the previous reviewer that stated that you used a few too many commas, especially in the phrase about Norm's ego. That was the only time it really disrupted the story in my opinion, but I didn't exactly grammar-check it. That just caught my eye.

If you were to ever continue this, I would be very happy, but I love it as it is as well.

Great!

Great story so far can't wait to read the next chapter.

Nice job, this is really good. So...um...yeah, that's about it. Unless you want a whole essay on why this was great and awesomtastical...well, its great and awesomtastical. Okay, well, uh, bye, and update soon!