Reviews for I'll save you
MrRainbow149ki chapter 4 . 7/27/2018
That is a REEEAAAALLLL good story there! Well done,my friend.
MrRainbow149ki chapter 8 . 6/27/2018
Man,this is REALLY an awesome story. Great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
Love
Jackie Scislowski chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
Totally love Michael and Katie
Jackie Scislowski chapter 12 . 7/2/2017
I really love this story it's so interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
i love the story from taylor whitted do more story about moonwalker plz
carol chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
i love this cool book that u made
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
I think that michael will save katie
MyOrli chapter 15 . 3/28/2014
Awwww! That was such a cute story! It was a nice little adventure and I like how Michael went through a couple of challenges throughout. Katie seems pretty intelligent, judging from the way she speaks during her pov. I like that Janet was brought into the story; I just adore her so much! And I like how Michael struggles with the nonviolence thing and then finally releases it at the end! Don't be so hard on yourself; you had an imaginative vision with a great storyline and wrote it out to the best of your abilities. At least you shared it and were able to get the story across. (I've seen some writings were I couldn't even comprehend what was going on and who was who because of the rushed and unpolished fashion it had been written) and the more the more you write, the more your writing skill level will improve! So be proud of yourself! I am certain that I'm not the only one who had fun reading this!
8649707hbdgc chapter 15 . 8/14/2011
Ok, best MJ fanfiction ever written. I love you for writing this. It was so beautiful and adorable C':
cheyenne123rocks chapter 15 . 7/31/2011
Aww what a story. I wanna read it again.
cheyenne123rocks chapter 14 . 7/31/2011
Aww, what a happy family!
cheyenne123rocks chapter 12 . 7/31/2011
Someone save them! Both! Where's katie? Oh, this is good, so many questions!
cheyenne123rocks chapter 11 . 7/31/2011
This chapter was not lame lauren. it was great. I just hope Katie is okay, and that michael dumps lisa.
cheyenne123rocks chapter 10 . 7/31/2011
Lisa is so mean! Man i think Lisa needs to get a life! How awful to hit a little child and lock her somewhere. Aww poor katie.
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