Reviews for The Product Of Betrayal
TheGirlInThePinkScarf chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This isn't really a pairing that I ever thought I would read, but you wrote it perfectly!

I absolutely enjoyed this!

I love that JoMo and Phil are Jeff's friends and that they're together too!
notherenotyet chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Sometimes, I only need one word to describe my feeling about a story: HOT!

Think we might need more Dolph-stories out there.

P.s. Good God, I remember them cheerleader times too. Horrible lol
Ambrosealley88 chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Now that's a pairing I've never seen before. I like it though.
slashdlite chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
A first and I thoroughly enjoy it!
GrandpasGuitars chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
This was really good. I enjoyed the set up, and how it felt real, like this could actually happen in real life. Keep up the good work.

I make fun of Nicky all the time. Some people don't remember he was a cheerleader- I DO!
Shorton chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Yay! M gotta love me some Dolph and Jeff. Such a cute story! You should make it chaptered!
NeroAnne chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
*DIES*

...

*comes back, glomps you* You are like..the BEST ever! I love you! I love you so hard! XD!

Story:

Awe, Jeff isn't lively. Hehe, Jesse can't keep up! So cool! Eve is so hot, she does know how to move her hips!

PHIL! XD!

Chris...you stupid bastard. WHO cheats on Jeff? Seriously?

and with TWO guys! OMG! He goes from hot Canadians to Dave? HOW?

Jeff is making Phil blush! Oh yes! XD!

Haha, XD! Gotta love the Phil/JoMo.

*reads on*

YES! Threesome! HOTNESS!

They BOTH belong to JoMo! XD! AHA!

Awe, poor Jeff. He's not wanting to give it a try.

XD! Great advice, Jo! XD!

XD! It's not our fault Jeff LOOKS hot enough to not be a slut. D!

Awe...Jeff's been so hurt!

*reads on*

..Why'd Phil leave? Did he go get Dolph? XD!

Ha! There's nothing wrong with fucking Matt! XD!

Hehe, XD! Ziggles! XD!

Nick so wants to love on Jeff! XD!

Charismatic Enabler. XD! Phil should get a kick in the ass! XD!

Awe, Nick is glad Jeff likes his nicky name! XD!

*reads on*

LOL! What an excuse to leave! XD!

She's into BOTH of them? OMG..XD!

YES! LEAVE!

Yes, yes. XD! Jeff has had bad luck. Least he's got Nick with him! XD!

Awe...cute!

It hurts the hell out of me to know that Jeff might never come back now...*sighs*

*reads on*

SWINGS! XD!

Oh..how adorable!

Jeff's still hurt over what Chris did to him...that arrogant fool..

Fix him, Ziggles!

Too precious! OH!

OMG! KISS! KISS KISS! I love that so much!

hehe, XD! Hoodie..AWE!

*reads on*

They gonna go fuck? XD!

OH YES! In the hotel room! XD!

Nick tastes good...oh man. Oh and by the way...BLOW JOB! YES YES OH YES!

haha, XD! Jeff knows how to suck on cock, XP. Proven. XD!

Jeff doesn't want to be prepped! XD!

So fucking hot!

Jeff's no slut. XD! Not to Nick, at least.

I love it! Beautiful ending! So perfect! Thanks so much! XD!
Jess1186 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Well, that was interesting! Never thought about Jeff and Dolph... but it worked and I liked it. Really well done.