This... this is such a good fic.

wtf?

wow this was really great! 5/5

you should write more like this :)

I do the same thing with people in the game! We throw them in water too. It's fun. I like this story, and I think you should continue, though I have no clue what you could do with it. It's all up to you to decide. Great work!

I would love to see this one-shot turn into a story. But instead of killing the women she becomes a friend of sorts. Kind of like she could help him understand he's "life".

Here's a vote for more.

Wonderful way of showing how detached Alex is, even when he tries to form a connection.

I could see the entire scene play out like a video, especially when she freaked out at the end. Great job.

That was nice. I don't know how you'd make a sequel to that, but if you did, it would probably be epic. It's a shame Alex can't set people down like his fellow free running video game monster, the Hulk. :(

Pretty cool. Like your style. Keep up the work.

Wow, thats a scenario I didnt expect to see played on.

I think the conversation went perfectly, though halfway through I was worried Alex was going to let her go. You know, "Ah hell I cant kill you now!"

All in all, I really liked it.

Poor Alex. Good story.

This is good

I really enjoyed reading this. I'd like it if you wrote more.

Not bad. This story gives us a new look into Alex's psyche. The mental conflict he deals with in this fic is realistic. It's not overly angsty or anything, thank god. :P

The ending fit right in, too. The civilian's fate was unfortunate, but it's something that Alex would probably do in that situation.

Overall, good start. Should be interesting to see what you come up with next. :)

Absolutely loved it- Sounds like a mental battle on Alex' part. That femme should have elarned to charm boys more. After all Alex isnt the typical man ;D

Hope to see more like this from you!

hey, that was really great!