great story i cant wait to read more and see if max can put all the pieces together to guess what amber really is and boy will she be pissed if she finds out that amber has a gun (probably taken from the same guy that shot max after she saved ella)

OMG OMG OMG! KEEP WRITING MORE!

THIS IS SO GOOD!

ps... i like ur other story too! :)

AWSOME! this is really good so far, please keep writing!

really good! but you need to finish one story before you go to another though. but still really good! hey do you know how to set up a vote?