I think this is probably my favorite chapter... Ziva caring so much for Tim... and giving so much of who she really is...

I know I left a review earlier, but I have to say, you NAILED Abby in this chapter. She's an intelligent, selfish idiot.

This story is one of the reasons I could never pick an absolute favorite story of everything you've published on here. There's too many awesome ones to choose from. I'm reading it for a second time and realized I never reviewed it... Thanks for sharing.

Kinda reminds me of the hunger games...
Still, love it (in a sadist kinda way)! Will defiantly read until the end then review again! :-)

You just dried up my entire resovior of tears, stabbed my heart on my sleeve multiple times and basically effected my very emotional self in every way…
I love it…
But you killed Jethro. I'm sorry, but that was just huge part of the sadness in this story…
Well written…
Well written…

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I'm going to leave you a nice, official review later when I'm logged in, but for now, I just want you to know how much this story got to me. Tears in my eyes most of the time, it was heart wrenching... a very moving piece. Gold star for you, sir/madam.

I like how you're having everyone have a moment with McGee, everyone is taking a part in his healing. Palmer, Abby, Gibbs, Ducky, Ziva, Tony - you've made sure not to leave anyone out.

Go Duckman! Finally, a Hurt!McGee fic that actually has Ducky play a role, he's so often ignored in fanfics... I don't have words for how sad and moving this chapter (and the whole story) was. Well done. I expect more tears before it's over.

Oh my God... the scene with Gibbs and McGee on the roof was unbelievably perfect, I definitely have a tear in my eye!

Argh, this is difficult to read, but so worth it. I'm a bit teary eyed right now.

McGeeeeeee! Oh, this is so heartbreaking. Ow. But I love it, don't worry.

Oh McGee! :,( Semper fi!

Damn, this story is amazing. Definitely getting favorited later. I'm so worried for Tim, how will he ever live with what he's gone through? D: I hope Team Gibbs finds him soon.

Well holy crap, you've got me interested. And McGee doesn't belong to her, he belongs to Gibbs!