| Reviews for The Forever Mage |
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Guest chapter 24 . 7/29 A real tear jerker at the end. You are a very good and clever writer. I think you could actually put this in paperback as is. Thanks Twowolves67 |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 24 . 7/16 You broke me!:( sob! I haven't cried so much since reading the end of "Angry Harry and the Seven" by Sinyk! You did an amazing job of pulling me in and making me care about Harry, his gals, and his worlds both past, present, and future! Bravo and thank you! Magnificent! You are quickly becoming one of my all-time favorite authors! See you soon on one of your other stories! ;D MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 16 . 7/15 Oh well, wrong again! See? I can't predict where this is going.., I love it! ;D You sure had a lot of haters! Wow! I'm glad you didn't allow it to put you off writing for these bunch of dunderheads! Sheesh! Now I'm feeling nervous for there seems to be more than one faction out to prevent Wixen from discovering their heritage and/or kill off any who might enlighten the world/galaxy that magic exists! Gods I hate fanatics of any stripe! Thanks! Onward...! MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 14 . 7/15 ! Nope, never in a million years could I have ever guessed this outcome! Good; I'm not the only one who postulated 'legacy DEs'. ;D Wow, just WOW! I won't believe Green's accusation of Harry's 'rage' destroying Hogwarts and killing thousands of the very children and refugees that he was trying to save unless there's proof beyond doubt! Green's hatred and unreasonable malevolence against his own species (regardless of whether or not he could access and utilize his magic, he WAS *Wixen*) for something HIS father CHOSE to do manifested in unspeakable acts against men, women, and children! So, would he LIE even from the grave? Bet your asp he would! So, until I hear different I don't believe a word out of the sick bastard's Pensieve! Thanks, sweetie! Whew! Tough chapter! :( MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 13 . 7/15 Oh, shite! Don't tell me that either some DEs managed to maintain a covert 'hereditary society' or that the old MMI6 has weathered the years to maintain some messed-up version of the SoS? "Masters'" actions seem a little too 'Dark' for MMI6, so I'd lean towards a legacy DE's group... Hanging on just for hate's sake as the obvious progress of non-mags can't be denied. Kewl chapter! Thks! MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 12 . 7/15 I LOVED ST: Voyager! Of course, I loved TOS, NG, and DS9 too, but Voyager held a special place for me as it showcased a *woman* Captain and made no 'big deal' about her placement, just as Uhura was never 'spotlighted' as a 'black' character, nor a woman, nor as THIRD in the chain of command. That's what made the ST universe so friggin' SPECIAL! Gene created a 'world' where these appointments were COMMON PLACE and natural but in the real world, they would have been polarizing and controversial! That's why I always wanted to live in the UFoP! Anyhoo, I meant to say this for ch. 11, but I forgot :( : I never got to watch the final 1-1/2 seasons of ST: V because 1) Our local channel that carried the Star Trek series' was bought by some religious group and we lost that affiliate; unless you had cable which I couldn't afford and then life went to hell and RL can be a 'right spiteful bitch'! So I missed all this drama with Janeway returning to the Alpha quadrant a hero! But may I say that unless you're taking liberties with Voyager canon that I find what happened to Janeway appalling! If the writers really did treat her character that way then I'm seriously PO'd: Kirk didn't get his promotion to Admiral questioned 6-ways from Sunday -even though he was the *youngest* admiral in history! Picard too suffered the 'slings and arrows of outrageous fortune' many times through his tenure as Captain, but did not come in for censure from his superiors! Why Janeway? Because she was a woman?! I guess I'm just going to have to pull it up and do a ST: V binge on Netflix and discover the truth for myself! Anyway, thanks for another great chapter! Love that Harry & Co. are discovering more and more Wixen are still out there and that Magicals haven't been driven to extinction! But what about the other Magical Races and cultures that inhabited the earth? Were they all annihilated? I will mourn if they were! :( Onward! MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 11 . 7/15 I believe that the answer to the 'questioner' who I felt rather rudely stated that they believed that this plotline was silly because all they'd (TPTB) have to do is separate the girls from Harry and poof, no more problem is: Separating this five permanently now would probably have consequences on the extreme end of horrible, you silly person! You obviously haven't been reading *this* story and are just upset because Mr. Marrs has so blatantly departed from any resemblance to Rowling's garbage and evinces an intellect greater than a rutabaga, also unlike Rowling! Sheesh! Some people! I'm thoroughly enjoying this story: The premise is intriguing and exciting and the mysteries are more than enough to keep me reading at speed! I thought the love scene was exceedingly well done. I don't know that I'd even term it 'erotica'; it was sweetly thrilling, but I viewed it with a slight feeling of wistfulness: Every girl's first time should be as wonderful and every woman deserves to be treated as Harry treats Naomi! Sigh! :) Thank you, Sir! MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 7 . 7/15 In the last "Q:" you answered, I believe the reader was asking how the non-magicals discovered Hogwarts, enough to cause it to be targeted for destruction in the last war? ;) But I think your description of the layout of the destruction and the lack of charring, etc. points towards an implosion from an over-powered spell or curse. (I haven't read the "...Four Founders" story yet, so my speculation is just that: Analyzing your description, knowing how magic can work, and working a theory. ;) ) I would almost guess that whatever ritual sent Harry forward in time actually caused the explosion... What I'm most curious about is what dire need would cause those in Harry's time to risk such a ritual to send Harry *forward* and which would, in turn, annihilate those performing the ritual? Interesting... Thanks! MelJ :D |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 2 . 7/15 Kirk says about Spock, "He took too much LDS in his youth!" I think the line is in "The Voyage Home". Then the lady oceanographer calls Kirk on the obvious faux pas! Good memories; good movie! ;D MelJ :D |
Outlook42 chapter 24 . 7/2 Thanks for sharing your story I’ve enjoyed reading it |
DeadFish37 chapter 8 . 6/11 You answered a review a chapter or two ago regarding whether you're misrepresenting Harry's character. I don't think this Harry matches Harry at the end of Four Founders, but I think it matches Harry's 11 year old personality quite well - which is reasonable when he's lost all his memories. |
Critical reader chapter 24 . 5/31 Stumbled over this gem of a story when looking at lists of some authors' favourite authors, and am glad I did. Not only was it an excellent idea to mix the worlds of HP and ST, but it is also well executed. There aren't many stories like this, more's the pity. |
benstone chapter 14 . 5/30 I cant read this anymore. I know I'm gay but harems are wow |
benstone chapter 3 . 5/30 is this about to be a story where harry smashes 4 virgins, like woah... |
Curran86 chapter 24 . 5/24 Epic. No other words. Just epic! |