OMG this is awesome I cant stop laughing

OMG! This is the bomb! But lawson is kinda... yeah, but still its amazing! I hope something happens between Evan and Ziggie! LUV DIS GOOD STUFF! :)

Poor Kenny! But that's hilarious! Can't wait for more.

-JDB

LOL This story is very funny, though I don't think the Mr. Lawson part really fits the story... I wonder what will haen between Mr. Ziggles and Mr. Bourne. personally I hope that the melons win, but that;s just my obsession with Mr. Ziggles.

By the way, who is Mr. Lawson, googling him did nothing :)

aw, I cant wait to see what happens between Mr. Ziggles and Mr. Bourne! Poor Poor Kenny messed with the wrong dude LOL.

~claps~ Nice job! love it! keep doing what ur doing!

OMG! James raped Kenny! *doubles over laughing* (that sounds mean but I don't care)

Poor Connor got his ice cream stolen by the Spirit Squad...those bastards must pay

And I had to laught at dear Mr. Ziggles...he is perfection in this story.

I love unique stories and this meets that requirement. LOL

Damn this is so much fun.

Congratulations, you win an internet and a half! It's slash gone awesome! Take that Barney!

A good read. Win!

This is starting to sound amazing! I'm for some odd reason confused about who Mr. Lawson is (I think I'm having a blonde moment though). Good job, keep up the good work!

-JDB

This is insane! Absurd! Illogical! I LOVE IT! :D

I love his lil obsession with the song LOL. Oh, he's having dinner with Mr. Bourne! That should be interesting! Mr. H makes me giggle though and Mr. Michaels seems like a good friend LOL. CANT WAIT FOR MORE!

Genius, I loved it.

Especially when Mr. Ziggles was thinking if he liked melons or cucumbers. Can't wait to see how the date turns out.

Oh, you crack me up! this is so funny! hoping for an update soon!

~giggles~ Mr. Lawson groped Mr. Bourne! ~keeps giggling and gets strange look from younger sister~ Hopefully that dinner date between Mr. Ziggles and Mr. Bourne goes okay (and Mr. Lawson kills Miss McCool)