9 years since it was completed and here I am. I loved it. Thank you

I don't know if you still read the reviews on this story but I wanted to leave a review. I absolutely love this story. The way you showed Draco's struggle and Astoria's effect on him was great, I really liked how even though she's a rebel she isn't perfect and that it makes her lonely (which is something that I didn't really get to see in her character in other stories). I also loved the slow burn between Draco and Astoria and the way they fall in love with each other without realizing it. For a second there I thought you were going to make Astoria and Daphne totally distant, and I was really happy to see that eventually Daphne standing up for her because I do imagine them to be close, even if it's not always. The last thing that I love is the dynamic between Draco and Astoria when they're already together, and her relationship with Narcissa. Great story, I absolutely loved it and the bonus chapters were a great addition!

I love this story!

I loved this book! You captured Draco and his inner turmoil perfectly. The story was so beautifully written, I could hardly put it down! I am definitely going to bookmark this for later :)

"You really are a fool, Malfoy." This line makes no sense at all. It should be her that's a fool people are scared of it because of it's meaning and representation not what it looks like and I'm just saying, it's not actually ink, nobody sits there and have it done to them like a tattoo.

Draco is a very skilled at occulemency and Astoria shouldn't be able to get that much information, I also couldn't imagine Draco actually wanting or encouraging someone to invade his mind.

And finally... her character develops. :)

And there she goes again... making fun of people's fears as if they're nothing. Pretending when she understands. But, honestly, nobody can understand anything until they godfreaking experience it themselves. But, I see none of that here. It's like a parent trampling on a teenager's thoughts and feelings because they are "insignificant". Her character seems really flat. All she's doing is criticizing and criticizing. And all Malfoy is doing is accepting and reacting exactly as she expects. It's too predictable.

Ugh. This Astoria sometimes makes me sick. What right does she have to criticize Malfoy's beliefs and ideals? And has those, goddammit. Why the hell are you undermining them?

... why does Astoria win every spoken and non-spoken argument?

This is absolutely brilliant, i can't get enough of how well you portrayed draco. Astoria is been marvellously clever, although it is still feels weird for her to accept the position as a spy. I love their conversations, it really sound like what draco would say. I would love to read more of your writings, you're really good at understanding characters without romantisizing them like teenage girls. Once again I'm sorry for the long review. I still can't spot anything to criticise, which happens, like, only once before this.

This is very enjoyable, honestly 140 something review is a proof of how underrated this story is. So far it had been perfect. I like how you admitted draco's coward side, and how he did not show any unnecessary impulse to spice up the story. It's been really hard to find a fanfiction based on the characters the way they are. Most girls who wrote fanfictions tends to romantisize bad guys, thinking that there is something deep and other bullshit stuff. I like draco just the way he is and this writing captures him perfectly. Sorry for the long review, i just wanted to point out how beautiful i find this fanfiction is. I hope I'll read more of your writings, I'll give more reviews on criticism next time (if i found one), have a nice day!

I love your story, please keep updating! Go Drastoria!

very good story !

This story is/was amazing! I love, love this side of Draco. It's all excellent. Well written.