Omg omg omg omg! This is probably one of my absolute favorite fanfics of ALL TIME! This fanfiction made me go through so many different emotions, I laughed everytime something funny happened and I cried when Derek 'died'. I am so glad that he didn't account die, I literally jumped for joy when I realized that the wolf was Derek. You are an AMAZING writer, this fanfic is really good, I love the plotline and there are barley any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. Are you still going to finish this fanfic? I really hope so, I'm sure other people are also dying to see read what happens next.

Is Derek coming back

did you name the chapter Always so that every HOO fan would ball their eyes out at the sight? this one word holds so many emotions! WHY!

please don't make her an evil backstabber because I really liked her in the books

it had better be temporary! I shipped Chlereck from the end of the first book! sorry for the tiny rant, I love you're stories.

During this chapter, I accidentally swore out loud when I was doing 'homework' and had to make up a really lame excuse as to why I swore.

Even if its just like one short chapter once a year or something D;

Ive been reading you're story since the beginning and it has always been one of my favorite fanfics, I've actually read it so many times. Out of the hundreds of stories I've read this one has always stood out to me and I really hope you finish it up one day!

Like, I really hope you find some time you stopped writing at the best part of the story!

Keep going with the story it's really good

Please continue this story

I really enjoy reading your story, and I hope you continue writing it.

Hey, I resently started reading this story and finished it up today. I have so many questions for you, but I only thinks it would be fair to wait and see if you are going to update. I have tried writing my own stories over and over again, but I just can't write the stories I love to read. PLEASE UPDATE! I am begging you!

So this reminds me of a book I read. It was called "Graceling" and there was this girl and boy, lovers, who were traveling to this kingdom to save the boy's cousin (I think). Either way, they got her, but the evil king had killed her mother (his wife) and was trying to convince them that it was an accident. They traveled fir days, and the evil king caught up with them and tried to gaff the boy killed because he knew about the boy's... /gift/ if you will. Anyways, he shot the boy, but the two girls and him still got away. However, the boy was dying and he said to leave him in this abandoned cottage way up in the mountains. However, the king found then again, while they were out hunting and he scared the boy's house and he fell into a frozen lake. Now, he was extremely close to death and the girl didn't want to leave him, but he convinced her to go and to return when they had vanquished the king. So she left, and she got on this ship. Well, the boy was actually a Prince and he gave her this ring that would make his people listen to her. Well, this one woman explained to her what it meant to have this ring in her possession and the girl freaked out.
It meant that she was princess- he was dead.

Yeah. Now, if you think of reading this, dint read this because it's a really big spoiler- he was actually alive, just blind and relying on his 'gift' to get him though.
But all in all, I think that this particular post of you plot follows that.
I just think so anyways.
But I love the story! I think this is the first time I've reviewed on a completed fic before I finished reading... and I've done this twice! *giggles*
I love it and I'm forging onward!

So... I was going to wait until I'd read the entire story to review...
But this was too awesome! We've had like, what? Three fight scenes? I am absolutely LOVING this!
The way Derek keeps getting whipped makes me smile. Yes, I do have a Derek getting yelled at obsession... but that's beside the point! Either way, I love the way Chloe keeps telling him off. She doesn't let him get away with it, instead making him actually think about his actions and showing him exactly where he went wrong. Of course, she makes sure to balance out the consequence with the choice and to talk out exactly where he went wrong. The fact that she didn't let him get away with it, simply turning a blind eye, makes me smile because she's smart and he learns. Most men think that they can get away with an apology, think that they can say sorry do that when the next thing comes around, the can apologize again. Derek's like that. Did the wrong thing, gets yelled out, cries and says sorry just so that the next time you screw up he can rip you a new one. And Chloe doesn't put up with that. If I'm remembering correctly, in TR, she actually calls him out on it. Chloe is shy and has her blonde moments, but she's still a fighter. And when she fights, she /fights/. She knows exactly what will make you think without completely burning you, the way Derek does.

I'm sure that after you've heard all this, you probably think I'm an anti-Derek. That I think she belongs with Simon. First, let me gag *gags* and secondly, my favorite color is emerald green... Now, is that obsession or what?
I'm loving this! It's amazing and I'm excited to read the rest!
Kisses,
-Jo

We're still here waiting for the day you update. And no we don't hate you. Just please update soon. I won't give up on reading and reviewing