Its awesome :D

Your story rocks socks man! Torres out, riley in.

I normally don't read short stories, but this was pretty great. I wish it was longer though! It was a fun read and an absolutely cute ending :)

Nice work, I love it! :)

Any Loker/OC-lover is good in my book. Noticed that this was the last chapter, that's too bad, I would have loved to read more. It's kinda simple, but nonetheless very, very amusing. You've portrayed Loker perfectly, I wish they would incorperate this into the show. ;)

My last advice, professional opinion? Write a sequel. :D

i like how u take the small little details from the show and put them into some small side thing, if u no wat i mean? good job :)

thumbs up

I've been waiting for a good Loker/OC fic for so so so so SO long, and this completely delivered.

You absolutely nailed Eli's character, as well as everyone else's, so well done! :)

Please think hard about writing another? I'd kill to read more! x

awesome! i loved this!

i think you should write another one because there aren't enough Loker/OC stories out there and theyre my favorite

Okay. Now do another Loker/OC story! There aren't enough and I CRAVE more!

Short, but a very very good ending! :D I loved it! Great job.

Mm you were right, it was a perfect ending! I love Loker's Radical Honesty babbling) Loved it! Please right more in the future!

Love it! I'll be wating for the last chapter:D

please update!

I love it so far! very interesting. I can't wait to read the rest! :)