Great job!

I loved the tension in Genis. And I am glad you didn't make him side with Lloyd and hate Mithos. Yes Mithos was a bad guy, but "pure intentions" I believe he did have. I really liked the struggle in his mind. The poor kid.

I loved it. The second half more so than the first, tho they both were really well done. Keep up the work!

Is it end here?

You brought such a mood in the story. envy you XD

Good luck on your next fic!

Kikki, i love your stories!

Hmm, i missed the second chapter... wait until read it.

Genis is torn, huh? You are really good in expressing their feelings...

Really good story! I liked how you showed Genis' feelings while being possessed by Mithos. Did you just cut out the part where Mithos shows Lloyd the flashback and Genis has to snap him out of it or did you forget? It's still good and if this is the end then wonderful ending. If not, keep writing!

Epic!Squee~

Lurve this story very much, from the emotions captured to the entire flow of the piece itself (as I said before). It was sad and tear-jerking, yet the humor at the end made it all better (well, mostly, anyways). Still some grammar issues that I evidently missed, but they're of no real importance... POST ZE SECOND PART ALREADY (or ish dis ze wrong fic?) OR ELSE! My inner (and outer) fangirl(s) demand it! XD

*Offers Genis-shaped cookies, since she put all the Kratos-shaped ones in her closet*

-Devy 3

I really like this. Made me tear up a bit, actually.

That was great. A fanfic I had thought of was Genis deciding to join Mithos when he learned the truth, and I really like your emotions in this. He really felt drawn the Mithos' idea of a world without discrimination, but in the end, he couldn't leave his best friend. Great story.