Reviews for The Return of the Ronin Warriors
Ronin Frost Data chapter 7 . 7/17/2014
Interesting ending.
This fic was descent.
Ronin Frost Data chapter 6 . 7/17/2014
A few more things: Sage would never listen to any kind of Rock music, nor will he ever say, "dude". The Ronin's would never say, "Morph" or "Morphin time". They're not Power Rangers!
Ronin Frost Data chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
It could use some clean up.
Why didn't the three ask about what Ryo was wearing? You know about his sub-armor or armor.
Ronin Frost Data chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
You have three different waters here: River, Lake, & Ocean. Since it's by Mia's house, it should be, lake. It doesn't make sense to say all three different waters in the same location.
And it's Rowen with an E not A.
It's not bad, but it's all over the place-meaning there's extra words that don't need to be there.
A.Keith Baker chapter 7 . 11/28/2009
Good outline. Can't wait to find out what Ancient meant by "death is your gift". Interesting!
Luma chapter 7 . 11/18/2009
What a cute story, I like it! :] I hope you update soon!
MaskedLady710 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Loved it! You should write more!

If you do I'll share my ideas with you.