| Reviews for The Return of the Ronin Warriors |
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Ronin Frost Data chapter 7 . 7/17/2014 Interesting ending. This fic was descent. |
Ronin Frost Data chapter 6 . 7/17/2014 A few more things: Sage would never listen to any kind of Rock music, nor will he ever say, "dude". The Ronin's would never say, "Morph" or "Morphin time". They're not Power Rangers! |
Ronin Frost Data chapter 3 . 7/17/2014 It could use some clean up. Why didn't the three ask about what Ryo was wearing? You know about his sub-armor or armor. |
Ronin Frost Data chapter 2 . 7/17/2014 You have three different waters here: River, Lake, & Ocean. Since it's by Mia's house, it should be, lake. It doesn't make sense to say all three different waters in the same location. And it's Rowen with an E not A. It's not bad, but it's all over the place-meaning there's extra words that don't need to be there. |
A.Keith Baker chapter 7 . 11/28/2009 Good outline. Can't wait to find out what Ancient meant by "death is your gift". Interesting! |
Luma chapter 7 . 11/18/2009 What a cute story, I like it! :] I hope you update soon! |
MaskedLady710 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009 Loved it! You should write more! If you do I'll share my ideas with you. |