Wow. You did a really great job on this I thought. Really well written. Some parts were a little odd, but altogether, very nice. Also, it's one of the most believable Kaname/Zero fics Ive ever read. Nicely done. -clap, clap,clap- :)

This is really well done. Usually I am really picky with the fanfictions I read but you did a really good job with Kaname's and Zero's characters. I honor this fic. It's really amazing.

Perfect Kaname/Zero interaction. There's not really any love involved in this pairing in my opinion; it all revolves around physical passion, comfort, necessity, and hate. XD I love it. Reminds me so much of Darkshipping from Yugioh (meh OTP). Great job on this one-shot. Definitely Kaname/Zero at its best.

~;~Shaku

interesting.. it's a bit dark, but i liked it. nice job.

that as so good! it's such a pity that it's only a oneshot.

are you not going to contribute to this couple anymore? you're so good at it. well, anyways, good luck on the rest of your fics! i hope that eventually you'll write something for this pairing again...

Damn it... that was stunning. It took my breath away.