| Reviews for What If? Naruto |
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   biginferno chapter 9 . 7/4 i hope you update and complete this story its been great reading whats here so far |
| 8 Guest chapter 9 . 6/7 Have Sakura get married to Omoi. Ino has to get married to Chōjūrō. Hinata has to married Sasuke. |
| jackyfloresq2001 chapter 9 . 5/29 can't wait for the next chapter in this story |
| Guest 8 chapter 9 . 5/5 Council let Naruto choose who Sasuke & Sakura married to. Omoi married to Sakura. Sasuke married to Kurotsuchi. |
| Guest115 chapter 5 . 4/17 Naruto vs Neij was most trash fight I have seen your a fucking Lazy cunt you could Write your own original FUCK WHY ARE SO FUCKING TRASH you just couldn’t write your own fight you fucking cunt FUCK YOU TRASH CAN OF A HUMAN GOODBYE CUNT |
| Guest115 chapter 5 . 4/17 Author ARE YOU FUCKING STUPID IF NARUTO CAN FUCKING TALK TO NINE TAILS DON’T YOU THINK THAT HE COULD HAVE ASK FOR MORE CHAKRA. But instead you have him get push off ravine dumb ass |
| Guest115 chapter 4 . 4/17 So you at telling me Naruto after weeks of training with Gai he is slightly stronger BULLSHIT and to become interrogator he is only slightly smarter again BULLSHIT and he is still a loudmouth, Dumb ass idiot that right there is l trash Writing and bullshit |
| Jhenifabray chapter 9 . 3/10 Loved |
| Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 1 . 2/9 I think you mean iruka not ikira or whatever it was you said |
| Mr.Easy chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 the only thing different from canon was that the idiot exposed his ability to steal bloodline, what did he achieve by doing this. did he not train at all for the past 5 months, because Kiba beat the shit out of him. Why does he always get beat up in every fight first even if he is supposed to be strong?. I am just sad that your Idea had so much potential and you also know how to write but ended up making this just like canon, and what's the point of having more characters there are plenty of characters present in the show. If you feel offended by this then feel free to delete this review and write me abuse in PM because I have once encounter an author like that, Hope that you take as pesky suggestion from someone who don't know anything about writing. |
| Mr.Easy chapter 2 . 10/6/2019 why is he the same old Idiot? Nothing has changed at all! |
| yindragonkiba chapter 9 . 9/18/2019 Loved it thus far wish there was more |
| Kingkong101 chapter 9 . 1/14/2019 This is way worse than Canon. |
| Luciendar chapter 3 . 10/5/2018 Pretty cool. The bloodline ability fits i think. Though, it does remind me of the villain from season one of Heroes. |
| Winged Seer Wolf chapter 1 . 10/2/2018 I had a thought of Naruto being the first exam procter of the chunin exams, turning the exam room into the room he used with Mizuki. |
