It's been YEARS since this was updated and i never commented, but i re-read it again and it's always been one of my fav DW fics on here. i wished it was finished, 'cause it's super cute, funny, and just awesome, but oh well.

Just like to say that I do think the story's really cute so far, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. [I also enjoy the title reference: to Final Fantasy *X-2 if I remember?* One of the best lines]

Harry Potter (don't remember which one though) and the Disasterrific that caught my eye from being in one of my favorite games : FFX-2 :D

lol. I have a feeling I know who that girl that dressed up as a guy was. xD Man, I wish I would've found this earlier so I could've like, piled you in compliments on how good you are for all the chapters, but I didn't. D: But I found it now, so i'm happy.

I liked this chapter, I like flamboyent Ling Tong, he's amazing, I think i'll create him in my mind and just make him my best friend instead of my current one. xD Cause he sure gives amazing advice, which I sure could use. Also, it is sad that all there is for Xiao Qiao is her and Zhou Yu... cause he's with Sun Ce. xD You know, I think Sun Shang Xiang and Xiao Qiao would actually be really good together, what with their personalities and everything.

You've just inspired me to want to write for this couple. xD

... It's sad that everyone knew except Xiao Qiao about all this. D: Oh well, they tried.

Then again, it's for the best. :DD

YESSSSSSSSSS GANLING! we were waiting for that! Tong and Ning are awesome together! Especially how Xiao sees them! We hope to see more of them!

omg Tong is soooooo cute! Flamboyantly gay is -fabulous!- lol. Loving it! He even has a reason lol.

haha, lol, wonderful on Xiao Qiao's thoughts! She seems layered, which is good.

Lin: Does he not seem a bit OOC though? I thought he was snarkier and more sarcastic.

we can't wait for what Xiao Qiao does next!

Let me start by saying that I really, really don't like Xiao Qiao. At all.

For some reason, though, I found myself drawn to your story and I really enjoyed it. Your characters are well written and you make them - even Xiao, shock horror! - very likeable. Well done.

another good chapter this is getting pretty good now. i can't wait for more!

i caught the HP reference.

and just wow ouch. so her sister guessed? as did everyone else? or not? well i dunno if the characters are ooc or not but it is a nice fic so far.

i don't know the game but i really like the fic so far already. good job with that. the characters already seem pretty good.

Oh I love Rikku references yay!

Great fic so far, can't wait for the next chap _

Hey! It's been a while since you've uploaded this chapter; sorry that I've taken so long to write up this review!

Well, first of all - thank you very much for your reply! It's nice to have a variety of fandoms to poke fun at; sadly, I'm a complete DW-addict - nothing else matters XD

(Btw, I hope that you don't mind if I use this reply to reply to your reply as well)

Ahahaha, crack pairings are fun, especially if they're written well and made to be believable! And I think that you're doing that really well in your fic, I'm happy to say!

Hahaha, AU is fun, and I suppse that it is pretty rare to find AU fics. I personally prefer writing in their time period, just cause I love the robes and stuff XD, but reading AU is great too, and definitely is a nice change. So thank you for that as well!

LOL~ The Romeo and Juliet thing came into my head for no reason XD Actually, it was probably because I had just finished the unit on it (school) and was still kinda dazed from it

And don't worry, your story sounds really interesting, so I'm definitely reading it! I really liked this chapter (just cuz there was /GASP!/ SunCexZhou Yu yumminess in it!) I dont think that you have to worry about your characters sounding OOC, cause you do have an AU setting, and you've already established some of your characters' traits and personalities. So as long as you don't deviate too far from that, you'll be fine :)

I'm really looking forward to reading the next part! Do hope that you update soon!

~KS

D: I thought it was pretty good! I think you really put down the character of a half-child half-teenager pretty well, especially when she talks about her family.

At points it seemed more like she was just narrating rather than being a character in the story though.

I thought SSX was great though.

Hmm... Well, first of all, welcome to the DW fandom! It's not much (compared to say, Kingdom Hearts, Final Fantasy and countless of animes), but it's definitely enjoyable and fun!

Sun Shang Xiang and Xiao Qiao~ About a year ago, I started on a fic where I had planned on pairing SSX and Da Qiao up together, but I haven't written anything since. I do hope that I'll get off my butt and continue with it, but things look dismal.

Anyways, I think that's why I clicked on your fic. Sorry for mindless ramblings, but I was just wondering why I did click on it, considering that I'm a devoted yaoi fan; I don't really read much else.

Either way, you've definitely caught my interest. Adding Zhou Yu and Sun Ce helps as well, since they're pretty much my favourite pairing . Gan Ning and Ling Tong aren't fair behind ;)

I was slightly surprised with the AU setting; I had thought that it would be set in their era. Still, it works well, so I'm not complaining. Actually, I think that it's rather cool :)

I like how you portray Xiao Qiao and Da Qiao as well - it sort of makes you sympathise with her, and see her in a really gentle light. For some reason, I'm thinking of Romeo and Juliet now, except genders are reversed XD Xiao Qiao is Romeo, in love with Zhou Yu (Rosaline) but gets rejected. From reading the pairings, I'll assume that Sun Shang Xiang will be Juliet D Rather weird way of looking at it, but hey, it's fun!

So, I do hope to read the next chapter (I'm surprising myself here o.0) and I actually can't wait! Looks like my holidays won't be so boring after all _

~Kurai-Shuwazi

An intresting Start,I will be watching this