You are missing a lot of period or exclamation marks at the end of your sentence where they need to be. Other then that I don't see much wrong.

amazing this story has every thing i like sex power zombies and naruto update soon gigity

Are you going to continue this story? I really hope you do!

Awesome first chapter. IGreat lemon, I really hope you continue this fic. The best crossover series I've read.

Kick-ass. But how long till the next update? U dont want to keep a vampire waiting.
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me and my friend love ur story cant wait for the next chp great work hope u have a good night or day

good chapter

good chap update soon please, I would also like to know when Tayuya will come in to play, and if she would become test subject/plaything for Naruto and Anko or join them?

hm..let us see where dis goes..

I would LOVE to see you continue with this work, very interesting and enjoyable to read... I would even be willing to help you out if you requested it, all I ask is that you please do not stop writing this wonderful story.

This is one of the best storys I've ever red I can't wait for the next chapter.

HEHEHE a great story good thing he didn't do what Wesker did and killed the hottie I wonder why people don't review this awesome story more though

Good lemon

Good plot

Amazing story

This is going to be a very sucsessful secule

Love it and awsome lemon. keep it up and plz let anko forgive him.

im still thinking about tracking you down and killing u for killing off anko im hoping in the next chap she will be back and it will be updated soon hopfully its been years since iv had the chance to torture somone afterall with the right ammount of money u can learn anything and in the special forces my skills were used often to bad i quit so i could be with my gf i miss the screams (giggles)