the kazekage'sname is Risa or something like that

i thought Naruto knew Kakashi...I think you said he was dating Iruka

Your either very autistic or your very stupid to think that the world would work that way. In any case it doesn't. Hell this looks like it was written by a 13 year old girl with raging hormones literally under control then for you to discover yaoi and become an otaku with depressing fantasies that will never come true.. So without further ado I'd love to leave and seriously hope to god not run into this profile again unless I want to end up being autistic myself.

I think this story would have been a very good fanfic if the author didn't make the characters so OC. I love the topic/main idea of the story but if it was rewritten by a different author who is more experienced in writing or if the author took this story and made it less OC I would consider it a 100/100 but because it was written like this 25/100.

i love your like kankuro at there'll be no kansaso but a fling and he'll realize what he needs is are just too cute.a pervert itachi and a tsundere 're wait for maybe neji would end up with sasuke since they're both each othr's wounds they say

What! COME ON:( ONE MORE CHAPTER! XD Things we're getting good

Oooo I love this story hahaha it makes me giggle! 3
hmmm... Honestly... Now that you made kanksaso possibly a thing... I think you should stick to it... Have itachi find somebody else maybe and have kankuro and sasori love eachother :3 that would be awesome!
update soon kay?

LOVE IT! I'm TOOOOTALLY FAVORITING THIS! And you HAVE to continue!

Thanks for updating! I wonder what Kankuro is going to do...

The hottest thing in my mind that you could do would be for itachi and kankoro (sp?) to agree to share there cute little uke. That and for gaara to surprise naruto with an ingagment ring as a surprise gift later!

Now! Going beyond what I would like to see do I only started reading your story about oooonhhhhh...2 hours ago sounds about right, anyway I can honestly say it's cute and well written. You pay close attention to the details of the caracters as well as settings. At some point u may want to add so more...serious topics in, BUT! I'm not saying its something required or even needed for that matter!

Sooooo over all I give the story a 8/10 which is a rather good score considering I don't commit on anything that's not 8 or above in my personal book! Now this is not a flamer I tell u this now! I merly want to be helpful in my comments... But anyways keep up the good work and update soon!

I think the pairing sasori and Kankuro is ok but then where would Itachi be?

Wait are they betting on whose gonna be tops? O.o
XD

KYA! SO CUTE!

heeey where is next chapter?

i think you should have a little more drama in the story. i would like if you made it like sasori tries kankuro out but misses itachi too much and realizes that thats where he needs to be :) but all of your ideas sound fantastic and ill enjoy reading more in the future