feelings, feelings and again feelings. I love this kind of writing, it's so simple, and even though it doesn't reveal many words, it still manages to convey feelings.

definitely a favorite!

wow...that was different...but really cute... _

beautiful

i already reviewed this on LJ but i want to review it again. XD

i just have one question: what happened to the time changes? hmm, although, i suppose you don't need them at all. it might actually be an improvement in flow without the time shifts. :D

dfkhsdfkhlfdhk. the details. *_* they're so clean and tidy and pretty. and it's all like puzzle pieces falling into place. the story ends quickly but the pace is just right. the overall tone of the story feels very peaceful.

i still adore the UBER SWEETNESS of this so much. asdlksjfdslkg. makes me want to reread the kite runner. not that i have time for any reading at the moment. D;

anyway, the ficlet remains awesome, m'dear. lol, i'm sorry if i sound like i'm in a rush, i still have stuff to do~ but, really, it's LOVELY~! X3

This was lovely and I really enjoyed reading it.