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Good ending! The last chapter was excellent, as was the rest of the story. Your take on the usual Edward/Bella dynamic was unique and different from what I normally read.

Good ending! The last chapter was excellent, as was the rest of the story. Your take on the usual Edward/Bella dynamic was unique and different from what I normally read.

Excellent story. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you!

I enjoyed this very much. I love how you articulated the struggle between Bella's desire to be with Edward and her absolute fear of hurting him. The description of his change and awakening was excellent too. I love the idea of the four of them living as a family.

That was visceral; we could feel the fear and pain. Good writing.

This is such a refreshingly different take on our Edward and Bella.

I love that Alice and Jasper joined them in immortality so they could form a family.

Good job with this chapter.

What a great scene.

Loved how you incorporated the ballet studio scene from Twilight into this chapter.

Edward just can't do what he is told.

Hmmm, so are they all going to be changed?

I find reading detailed sex scenes very boring, so I skipped much of this chapter. Glad they were able to connect though.

A www, I was so afraid that she had drained him, but at least he got to see her before he died.

Very interesting development.