Great story, but im pretty upset they just go and name the children without Bella, after all she went through to have them. She didnt even get to hold them after, and then they took the naming from her aswell. Bad form Cullens.

update soon

I really enjoyed this journey. Sad to see it end before the final but it was so fun while it lasted. :)

j'aime ton histoire dommage qu'il n'ait pas de suitej'aime ton histoire dommage qu'il n'ait pas de suite

I really hope you plan to finish this story.

The timeline of the story is screwed up. At first you kept switching between saying that Jasper and Bella met a month or a few months after the Cullens left. Now you've just said in one of the previous chapters that it was close to Christmas and in this chapter it's suddenly a month to the end of the school year.
Also Jasper had finished high school before the whole birthday disaster so he can't go back to school. I don't get why you're mixing that up

Oh and Jasper isn't Edward's little brother. He's much older than Edward.

It's Forks, not Folks.
I enjoy your story, even though the progress of Bella and Jasper's relationship didn't feel very natural. This chapter however disappointed me. I just don't understand why they would welcome the Cullens so easily. It's one thing to forgive when they leave a human girl that they met a few months before even though I wouldn't forgive them for that either. In your story they also kicked Jasper out of the family. They kicked out a guy that was supposedly they son, brother, husband. The guy they knew and claimed to love for decades. Alice had somewhat of a reason but the rest just decided he's not good enough to be part of the family. And now they're back and you didn't even address the problems. That's not how family works. Can you imagine your parents telling you that you have to get the f# out of their life because you're causing too much problems? And then when they changed their mind would you just hug them and be ok with everything that happened? I sure as hell wouldn't. And it makes me cringe to see Bella and Jasper welcoming the Cullens back with no problem what so ever

So I just read through all the posted chapters and find I’m really enjoying this story. I hope you plan to continue. I’d love to see if Bella decides to carry a baby for Rosalie and Emmitt. What will jasper think? Will it cause a lot of tension between jasper and Bella or will they work through it? I’d be willing to bet jasper won’t go for it due to how it affected Bella the first time but maybe...

I love what's been written so far

Great story

Love the story. Hoping you find your way back to completing it soon.

are you going to finish this story? or make a sequel?

are you going to finish this story?

Awesome! I love this, do Raine and Jake have twinlepethy?