| Reviews for Of Sparrows and Princes |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2019 I came back to read this again and damn is it worth it! It makes me feel nostalgic to think back to 2012 when I first saw this wonderful fanfiction. I cant imagine my life without constantly rereading your fanfics like an obssessed monkey. Thank you for creating this beautiful masterpiece and I hope you will continue supplying me with the drug call Your Fanfics. |
Guest chapter 21 . 12/23/2018 Sitting across from them, Lussuria's eyes nearly fell out of his head when Haru's hand whipped out and darted towards Bel's right ear. I'm laughing so hard! |
Sadia251 chapter 54 . 4/24/2018 I just recently found this story and I love it! I feel like your story has a sense of believability as you don't change either Haru's or Bel's personality to suit the story. After reading your story with Bel and Haru, I can't imagine Haru with anyone else besides Dino. Both of the pairings are in tune with their personalities so I can imagine Haru falling in love with either Dino and Bel or any other pairing you write with Haru! I love your writing and I've been constantly rereading your stories! |
Queencloud2443 chapter 1 . 3/7/2018 I first found this story back in 2011 when I was still in High school and I find myself rereading this on occasion when I need a hitman reborn fanfic that I can believe. There are a few good reborn fics on this site, but yours have a sense of believability that I find endearing. I've never thought of shipping Bel with Haru and after reading this I can't ship her with anyone else, well I can and it's Dino but that's also your fault. I don't think I've ever left a meaningful review on your stories and that's because I was always an impatient idiot that just wanted to move onto the next chapter, but I want to so badly go through this chapter by chapter and review the fuck out of it! I honestly haven't read this story in a few years now, but thats a perfect amount of time because things can hit me fresh again. What I do remember and why it's in my short favorites list is because the way you characterize each person is amazing. I can believe everything the varia members do, i don't have to push my imagination far to believe Bel falling for Haru or how the other Varia react to their relationship. I've been rewatching Reborn lately for a fic I'm working on and I've taken note that Haru is a bit more stronger than Kyoko, but that's a whole different essay, and I can see her thriving under these circumstances. I generally have a hard time getting into a characters mind and writing how they would do or react to something. It takes a lot of skill but you make it sound effortless. Thank you for writing this fic beautifully, because you were the reason I started writing Hitman Reborn fics and I find myself reading your Haru/Dino series whenever I get stuck on my own writing. Thank you again! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 I love this pairing in this story, cause so different and refreshing.. im Shipping haru with bel now :) |
justacatthatprocastinatesalot chapter 55 . 12/15/2017 It took me an enter day to finish it but God, I loved it way too much! You are an amazing writer~ |
justacatthatprocastinatesalot chapter 1 . 12/14/2017 The part about killing her myself in this chapter really surprised and creeped me out xD But it is also something that Bel would definitely do. XD |
ObsidianPhantom chapter 11 . 6/22/2017 OH MY SWEET BABY JESUS THIS IS GONNA GIVE ME A NOSEBLEED! *Lunges for the tissue-box* I've never had to take so many cold showers before... Dear LORD this story! This PAIRING! Gods, I was not prepared for this pairing! I'm constantly running away from my computer, squealing like a schoolgirl, hiding my (redredredRED) face, or face-palming. Honestly you could use this fic to take over the world, I don't know how that would work, but it's just that dangerous. XD I. Am. Hopelessly. Addicted. |
mocha34345 chapter 34 . 5/28/2017 Is it bad that I started focusing on how many times you used the word lover than the actual story |
justsimplyme18 chapter 7 . 2/2/2017 this is the first time that I read a Bel x Haru fic and it is really good! keep up the good work author-chan :) |
alliah0709 chapter 54 . 1/31/2017 You know, this was amazing. This was such a compelling story between Haru/Belphegor. I was intrigue and curiosity gets the best of me then. As I was started reading, I can't take my eyes off it. And so, just to satiate my overflowing curiosity I actually disregard my studies and be done with it. The first chapter are really promising and so the succeeding part. It was indeed a page turner. I love it so much. I never thought of Haru and Belphegor romance could be as sweet as this one. And they seems to be perfect fit for each other,haha. As always, I really like Haru. Her attitude and behavior in here is quiet admirable. She was smart, fearless but with such a big heart. She was defiant in a right way. You cannot simply boss her around which I find it awe-inspiring. Even Belphegor intimidating presence, Haru is unwavering. Though she finds him downright annoying and insolent but that doesn't affect her in any way. Haru was also a staunch lover for Bel. She was too submissive and that shows how deep-seated her love for him. Even though their relationship was not in a good start but the development was incredible. It was a heart warming really. Their sweet moments or petty quarrels are very much amusing. I don’t really like Belphegor but in this fanfic, I’ve learn to like him. Though he’s so damn persistent in molesting the pretty brunette and get what he wanted but revenge is sweet. Haru always finds a way to get even like when he was trapped at the vault with cannons on the loose, haha. It was so funny when he keeps insulting Haru’s figure but along the way he was intoxicated with it. He maybe always cranky towards Haru but without even realizing it, he was started to fall for her little sparrow. He even kills for the sake of her lovely wife. And definitely, he was so damn sweet in his own way. I’m chilled to the bone over Bel’s possessiveness and being an ardent lover. I was having a time of my life reading it. I’ve got my brain overload and stirring mixed emotions all the way down to the last chapter. I enjoyed it so much. Thank you for this wonderful story. I hope you can continue with the sequel. I still can’t get enough. I wanted more,haha. But thanks anyway. You really are one of the best writers. Goodluck! |
jemxmarcial chapter 55 . 11/15/2016 I've read this ficlet for about five times already and I can't help but squeal in all my fangirl feels goodness when I realized something. Lmao. The comparison between the first time Haru got kidnapped and the last kidnapping. Their roles have been completely reversed?! And it was sooooo cute! There are lots of instances that I compared and the reversal was so irresistible! Anyway, kudos to you and I hope to see more of your future works! I love your BelHaru fics and you're definitely the best writer of this ship! |
Anna K.S chapter 54 . 7/7/2016 thank you for the story |
Anna K.S chapter 53 . 7/7/2016 really now? really? that's all what bel did to that family who attempted to have haru gang raped? and the bitch galatea turned into her hand maiden? really? |
MrsRegulusBlack123 chapter 18 . 4/27/2016 Oh man, I decided to reread this story and wow was it a good decision. I had forgotten my tremendous love for Alaisdair and this chapter in particular! |