Gran historia, me ha encantado.

I agree with you as to Canon Edward's decision to leave Bella in order to keep her safe. I definitely saw that one coming. He even told her in the hospital that he would stay as long as it w as in her best interests that he do so. That was his "out" clause in his promise.

Bella is HEALING, not healed. Edward realizes that while she is on the road to recovery, and has made enormous strides, she isn't all the way there, yet.

Thanks for taking the time to read other writer's fics. I think it is very kind of you. I have read "This is not my Life" more than once, that is to say, I read the kidnap chapter and THEN picked back up when the search party found them in the woods. I just couldn't stand the thoughts of Bella and/or Lilly being hurt by crazy James.

I haven't started reading this yet. I read the reviews. I think it is cowardly to smash an author as a guest reader. Now I will start reading.

"All the sudden" is incorrect. It's "all of a sudden."

You wouldn't say "Mine thoughts were confused and disoriented," so don't say "Mine and my family's thoughts were confused and disoriented." Use MY ("My and my family's thoughts were confused and disoriented.")
"...she thought more along the lines of what I thought then what Mike did." Use THAN instead of THEN. "Then" means "when." "Than" is used for comparison.

Why does jasper say the most obvious things like we know you dumbass

had to speed read this chapter so I didn't use a whole box of tissues. I remember a scene like this from the American Horror Stories series. Im on Emmetts page I could do with so vengeance in the near future but I will settle for some healing instead.

I try not to leave anonymous comments because it’s always criticized as bashing. It was a good story. My one comment is that you need to be a little more careful with word choice. The entire story (with maybe two exceptions) you used T-R-A-I-L for trial. Trail is something you walk on and trial is either a test or a court proceeding.

Great story .loved it

Interest is PIQUED, not PEAKED.

I thought you said not graphic...? The last two chapters were beyond graphic, triggering and overtly salacious. Some author state when a chapter(s) can simply be wholly skipped without taking away from a story if readers are sensitive. Just a thought. I already knew Bella’s past was horrifically tragic but I could have been spared the gruesome details . This story is years old so I’m not positive if PMing you would have yielded a response at this point.

Truly an amazing story.
Have cried and laughed through the story

Chap 7-
Alice's visions work on choice.
How did she know in advance Jasper and Emmet would be needed to restrain Edward if bad dreams/PTSD don't really have the option of choice?