%&*(&%&( %&*( %*% it, you Elven IDIOTS.

He mentions the books here. Has he actually read LOTR back on earth?

I don't understand how you can be so unbelievably bad at keeping your tense straight. It's infuriating.

I’m done. The valar are evil bastards who interfere too damn much. And I mean evil literally. Not on the scale of Sauron but evil nonetheless. They kidnapped a child, ripped him away from everything he knows, drop him him into a potentially deadly situation with no warning, information, weapons, or hope. Demand he do their bidding which will involve more evil and still give no information help or anything. I’m out. The characters in this story just plain suck.
So far Harry has impacted the story not at all. And now he is getting way to preachy. Just fuck right off.

I’m not impressed with this writing. Or harry as a character. Such a fucking pussy. I’ll give this one more chapter in the hopes that harry mans up and stops being a huge fucking disappointment.

Wow! Just wow!

Decent story ruined already by you being too stupid to know how to pick a tense and stick to it.

Moron.

Past or present, pick one and ONLY one.

Good story, different then some but same as all. I see as most that it follows the story of LotR but its to be expected. Who could out do that story?

This was absolutely fantastic. Well done.

yawn it is like one long prophecy where words can only be understood after its done. harry becomes somewhat like a magic guide of wisdom speaks non sesential bs like some guru

Good, interesting, nice and original story.
I couldnt stop reading it.

I love this, wonderful job. One of my favorite LotR crossovers. So many powerful emotions. Great character development. You did a wonderful job with this, thank you for writing it! I really enjoyed it. :)

Harry is right about Galadriel. Mendling witch always invaded people's minds.

The repetition of doom and boom actually got rather annoying and disrupted the reading flow. I ended up just glossing over the last half of the chapter. I get what you was trying to do but in the end it just ditracted from the story more then it added to it.

I do like the plot so I will continue reading, hopefully with no more boom and dooms.

I have loved this story! thank you!