Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

Fluff is fabulous

That was incredibly fluffy and awesome!

AWH!

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

It would be so funny if they did just get together like that.

We're going to have sex, and then get together.

Well, they will. I bet they will.

HOT BABIES! :P

FLUFF! It was not too fluffy, although something would have to be extremely fluffy for it too be too fluffy for me.

happy FF birthday, sorry it's belated and no it wasn't to cheesy for my mood it was just perfect so thanks

Hah, that was just a tad bit fluffy. But great job nonetheless. You're a great writer, I really love the dialogue you have between them. Thanks for writing and congrats on your one year!

~ E

Thanks.

I'm a little less depressed.

This was good.

I like fluff. x

this was great. i think the ending was good as well not only did it leave it open incase you wanted a sequel but didn't leave any major holes in the story unanswered

Hey! Great oneshot. It ws just as I like them. BTW I just posted a link to an unaired season II scene on jisbon dot freeforums dot com, but you can find it on youtube, too. It's the one where Minelli withdraws the RJ case from Lisbon and Jane. :) xxJo

:) that was far from being "too cheesy", loved it :P

Thanks for writing.

I love it! you did awesome. It is definately not crappy. You have a way of writing that is amazingly beautiful. Great job! and happy one year! You really should add more if you find the time! I would love to read more!

Thanks for sharing!

Nocejob, you're an excellent writer. You're right, it was a LITTLE fluffy, but it definately wasn't "crap" as you said. I thought it was good and will look at other things you have written. Keep up the good work :)

Also, you can watch my videos on YouTube, I review the Mentalist. And follow my twitter.

~RileyAnnDavison

I like fluffy stories!