Wow that was amazing!

XD i like it a lot, good job.

i Love it! Awesome job! Wish there was more fics like this out there

DAMN! it was AWESOME!

what I found the most surprising was that, in such a short story in over such a long time, you made it real. You actually made it believble that they ended up loving each other, which is hard work. believe me.

good jobXD want more these. Try making a several chaptered story around these linesXD

xoxo drusillamalfoy

I really loved this. I really really wish it weren't a oneshot.

Nice one! I always love a good Spike OC fic!

thank u so much i have been looking for a good Spike lemon and u wrote it so well that it ...on second thought i better not finish that sentance cause i dont know what is allowed on this website

Great one shot. Tastefully done!